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VS (Chapter 11) - Sun 29 Sep 2019

Hello,

I just love how this story is progressing! I already see Kagome and Kagura being inseparable in the near future! XD It was super funny to see how both Sesshoumaru and Kagome got jealous.

And it was sweet how Sesshoumaru was still insecure about Kagome's feelings for him. I had a stupid grin on my face for the whole karaoke scene! LOL. But I'm happy for him. Things are moving on.

It remains to be seen if that is actually a good thing. I don't believe that they will have it easy in life and probably won't be a "real" couple for some time to come. Wouldn't it have been better to not know about the other's feelings? XD

I expect you to torment the love bird and us a bit more! ;)

Hojo won't leave my mind. I was surprised that he made an appearance at all. And he seems to be a stubborn bastard. LOL So he took a photo of the girl kissing? *grimaces* That might lead to quite a few complications in the future. Especially considering that InuPapa is an important politican.

I'm looking forward to your next update!

 


Neelixonee (Chapter 11) - Fri 27 Sep 2019

What a sweet chapter! *Swoon*


KShadeslady (Chapter 10) - Fri 27 Sep 2019

LMAO at Sango! Yep! She has definitely been with Miroku for too long! Cute! I’m with Sango...they are only related by marriage. Awkward but not incest! Really fun chapter. 


LovemeUsui (Chapter 11) - Fri 27 Sep 2019

I feel a little more satisfied with this chapter.  Can't wait for more.


InumeT_FlyGirl (Chapter 11) - Fri 27 Sep 2019

I love Kagura! She is so funny. 


daapatemysoul (Chapter 10) - Wed 25 Sep 2019

God damn, woman! That is seriously hot stuff!! Please tell me the next chapter contains at least some serious lime starring both of them? 


Blommie8 (Chapter 10) - Wed 25 Sep 2019

I hope the story would be complicated....even they're not really sibling but people will always see them as it. I like the built of their relationship. I hope more drama to come....in the end i don't know what will you write for the end. Wether they give up or the parent give up. And other complicated thing in public. Please write it till the end....thank you

 


LovemeUsui (Chapter 10) - Tue 24 Sep 2019

Yesssss an update! Off to read!


Katrina Kee (Chapter 10) - Tue 24 Sep 2019

OMGOMGOMG!!!! That was sooo HAWT!!!!  I wonder what the event will bring on? Probably paparazzi and headlines concerning Sesshomaru dating his new stepsister and being mean to them both, etc........Well can’t wait to find out what the next few chapters will reveal. Of course I wonder when Kagome will start beating herself up over not getting birth control at the same time as Sango did lol!!! 


KShadeslady (Chapter 9) - Sun 22 Sep 2019

This was a fun chapter. I like Kaguras personality. 


Blommie8 (Chapter 9) - Thu 19 Sep 2019

Sorry....i just insert emoticon. But the result is (?). Anyway....good story. Next please...


Blommie8 (Chapter 9) - Thu 19 Sep 2019

???? 


Dawn Peyser (Chapter 9) - Sun 15 Sep 2019

Keep it up its getting really good. Would like to see if you plan on bringing Hogo or Koga in the mix.

Like on a holiday break. 


LovemeUsui (Chapter 9) - Sun 15 Sep 2019

*bangs head on desk*

 Cliff hangers everywhere 


VS (Chapter 8) - Fri 13 Sep 2019

Sneaky, sneaky Sesshoumaru!!! Of course she can't forget him when he keeps sending her messages and reminding her of his existence! Poor Kagome. XD Just when she thought she can stop thinking about him. That's not allowed. LOL

I really like how Sesshoumaru is super confident and sure that he will change Kagome's opinion about a possibly relationship and yet he is still a bit worried.

Maybe even scared a bit? Because it sure came as a surprise to him that he isn't feeling only lust for her. So maybe this is unknown territory?

It's refreshing to read a story where Sesshoumaru and Kagura are friends and she is not pinning after him! I hope I will see more of that weird friendship. ;)

Looking forward to your next update!


KShadeslady (Chapter 7) - Sun 08 Sep 2019

You are such a tease! Than you for updating. 


LovemeUsui (Chapter 7) - Sun 08 Sep 2019

Noooooo. I want to say I'm so excited when I see these updates but the cliff hangers and chapter lengths are torture!


VS (Chapter 6) - Thu 05 Sep 2019

Hello,

I finally found some time to catch up with this story! You have chosen a very controversal topic to write about and that makes the story even more interesting. I like the pacing so far!!! Keep it up like that!

The way you write about Kagome's inner battle is great! Her fight between feelings and morals gives the whole story life. The poor girl is going to explode some day. XD

I think it was a good idea to write about Sesshoumaru's thoughts. You have added some layers to his personality with that. I never thought that he would feel insecure and anxious. And I was kind of afraid that he was interested in her because of his studies. But no there are only real feelings, thanks for clearing that up. I'm also wondering if he never felt uneasy with that step-sibling issue, or if he just was able to sort things out and make a decision. That would mean that he is a few steps ahead of Kagome.

I love that you wrote the bathroom scene twice just with reversed roles! Showering Sesshoumaru was hot, you described every detail -  his movements and her feelings/thoughts. That was great!!! Bathing Kagome was less descriptive, or maybe I was just distracted from the picture of Sesshoumaru laying on the floor and peeking. 

Mama Higurasi seems to be clueless though I'm not sure about Inupapa. Could it be that he knows/suspects? Why else would he send Sesshoumaru to look after her and not Souta? 

Anyways, I'm looking forward to your next update! Now that they have to go separate ways again things are going to get even more interesting!


Nallely (Chapter 6) - Thu 05 Sep 2019

Ok, you need to keep going with this amazing fic, I actually like this Sesshomaru and Kags, they are diferent but not OOC.


KShadeslady (Chapter 6) - Sun 01 Sep 2019

Lemons all around. Yummy! Bad dog...wonderful updat! Thanks!


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