You know, I don't even like high school fics. I read that one because you wrote it. And I liked it!!! :D
Thankfully you didn't focus too much on the hs setting. The conversation between the girls was just funny! Hojo would have given her a small gift too, indeed. XD You portrayed Sango like some sort of older sister, and I think that that is more than fitting. I even liked the hair-ruffling-part! You are very good with such small details!
The kissing was incredible. I love how much you focused on this moment and how detailed you described it. It really felt like the world stopped moving and only those two were important.
The ending was hilarious! You did well with this one. ;)
