Great update - can’t wait to read more! Hopefully there isn’t as long between updates!
Ok, so, I think I can understand, why Touga and Inukimi did, what they did. They probably didn't mean to be inconsiderate, but I feel like having (forcing?) Souta to be there when his relatives arrive (who weren't there for him, when he lost his family), is somehow humiliating, even though it is not meant to be.
So ... is it bad, that I feel a bit giddy about this Tournament? Because I'm pretty sure that Inukimi and Touga will make faces, when they realize, that the Lord, they thought they could drive into a corner and force a mating with his daughter, had an ace up his sleeve the whole time.
But I'm not sure about Kagome going alone. What if they notice her? What if they see this as kidnapping and declare war against the North, because obviously he can't give back the stones or Souta and the West mustn't know about Kagome (yet).
And ... I think, I like the Souta/Rin pairing. It sounds cute!
nicole (Chapter 2) - Mon 27 Aug 2018
Update please i love the outline
snow (Chapter 2) - Sun 26 Aug 2018
this is an interesting story looks really good :O, please keep updating your stories they are good!
Nice chapter, please update the next chapter quickly!
Toni (Chapter 1) - Wed 08 Aug 2018
Interesting plot! Cant wait for more
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