That last one was awesome! I wish it could be fleshed out some.  
      
This was the one that made me review. That could have been longer loved it. 
      
Toni (Chapter 3) -  Tue 30 Jan 2018 
love it  keep it going  
      
Alex (Chapter 2) -  Thu 25 Jan 2018 
Excellent work. Next please. 
      
Wowww! I want more! So deliciously tantalising! 
      
   
   
 
 
 
										 
									
									
																										
								
								
								
																								
															
													
					
				
								
				
				
			
				
				
		
				
	
			
			
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