Yup-I truly love this story. 

Haha such a good description of him!

Hmm

Warms my heart!

Favorite! I love the imagery. It's like drinking a cup of coffee. Little warm sips. :)

Haha such a good description of him!

Okay, I get it. It's easier to understand when you use quotation marks for actual speech.

I'm confused; is he reading her thoughts?

Interesting. A bit confusing, so I'm looking forward to some dialog. 

I love this!  I like that you pace yourself and don't push too much too soon.

This is fast becoming one of my favorite stories. There is poetry in your writing.

I'll be watching out for updates on this one! So far I like the buildup and your use of imagery. Thanks! :-)