I feel as if this chapter was pushed to hard. Kagome mood change from yelling pervert to "there's no way sesshomaru would be disrespectful." it was a very forced switch from embarrassed to denial. It didn't flow together, I believe it's in the wording and how it's said together. Other than that it was good, I don't really understand what lead to sesshomaru "willingly" use his mokomoko tail... thing. It felt out of character so early in the story.
However, I did enjoy it. Keep up the good work.
Really enjoying this story!
Nilee1 (Chapter 16) - Tue 30 Jan 2018
Too cute :-)
LOL!!! Too darn funny! Well played Kags! Wonderful update. Thank you!
Treading on thin i there Kagome but stand your ground girl! Lovely update. Thanks so much! Glad you are back. Hope that all is well.
kB (Chapter 16) - Tue 30 Jan 2018
Excellent chapter! I loved the grandfathers reaction to Sesshomaru looking at Kagomes chest XD
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Uh ohhh! Can't wait for more!!
Mona (Chapter 15) - Wed 17 Jan 2018
Hoping for another update soon! I cannot wait to read Inuyasha’s reaction as well as their reaction to Kagome’s and Shippo’s relationship (mother/son bond).
LOL! Had to poke that bear! Lovely update. Thank you!
Mars (Chapter 14) - Fri 12 Jan 2018
Shit just got *real*.
I hope Sesshoumaru's mother is humbled by Kagome's abilities and powers.
kB (Chapter 13) - Thu 11 Jan 2018
Excellent chapter. I love the soft tone you have kagome at the end and the way you had her put Sesshomaru’s perspective in place. Shes much more mature in this fic than in canon
Oh please update soon, I adore your kagome and sesshomaru
Yaayy such a long chapter!! Can't wait to see what his mom is going to do
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