What a shocker~ I didn't expect for all of this earlier drama to be a ruse, especially that it was all meant for Sesshomaru. I have one question though...after reading that moment when Kagome turns to "normal" she looks sad, is it possible she's conscious of what's happening and maybe willing to a certain extent?
This was a very interesting chapter. Sesshomaru's mother maybe involved. I find that hard to believe but you never know for sure...LOL
I think Sessho has taken on more than he thinks. I really like this story and looking forward to more updates. Keep up the good work. Your writing skills are excellent.
Nicole (Chapter 4) - Sat 19 Aug 2017
Hmmm. The trouble with this kind of creature is that you can't believe exactly what they say, necessarily. And how did it get loose? Was it only playing at being bound? I look forward to the next chapter.
Interesting chapter. Could this be something that Kagome may have came in contact with while travelling through the well? Looking forward to more chapters. You are doing very well with your English in my opinion. Geat job!!!
Nicole (Chapter 2) - Sun 06 Aug 2017
Fascinating! I can't wait to learn more about what is going on!
Wow, she's really messed up. I wonder what's taken over her and how it took over her? I hope they find a way to help her!
This is a very intriguing start to your story. It is written nicely considering English is not your native language. The story has gotten my attention and I am looking forward to reading future chapters. Keep up the good work...you are doing fine.
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