great  so looking forward to more chapters 

AWwwww....Sesshoumaru was so sweet being there for Kagome like that. Love the chapter. Inuyasha is always such an idiot. Kikyo is just nuts for even wanting Inuyasha...he's just to childish. At least Kouga had some sense. Just so enjoyed this chapter. Well done!

I absolutely love this story! Especially the frequency of the updates.  I'm glad Kagome walked away from Inuyasha and I hope she doesn't linger too long in this depressive state.  cant wait to see the further development of the sess/kag relationship. 

GREAT chapter! I just hope Kagome comes to terms with her new abilities. Inuyasha is going to be so jealous of her, because, she's better than him LOL!

i will be honest I was so happy when i saw an update!

well, you certainly love gore, but her dream is perfectly reasonable!

one thing that disturbs me is the fact that those enemies are so overpowered it isn't even funny! that youkai female controls life and death can bring the dead to life can stop time yada yada and other super duper things and has an army of strong underlings....i bet she was the one to orchestrate the transformation no? where did she come from?where was she till now? was she in the jewel? it isn't very clear. so i would be careful in balancing the things a little.

Another thing, i find myself skipping parts of text because i can't understand it! the tense is all over the place. the thing with "would" is making me tear my hair! why not say Kai pulled back another set of chains instead of: Kai would pull out another set of chains. English isn't my mother tongue it gets tiring frustrating and difficult to understand the sense. sorry! for me would means future an action that didn't yet happen so i don't understand did he pull that chain or would pull it in the future or will think about doing it? so like i said i lose lots of action because i have to concentrate on what is happening now, not would happen?

i apologize, its probably my lack of knowledge, i enjoy the plot but for me its difficult to read.

thx for updating! good luck with your writing!

This is great so far can't wait for a new chapter

We found out some information! But still so many questions unanswered! Thx for updating! 

They underestimate kagome! She will not be tainted! And sesshoumaru will help! He was underestimated too! Inu and kikyo... Now that pairing may succumb to temptation! It's too intense, her being alive again, her scent bla bla! Inu stands no chance! 

i find myself eagerly waiting for an update for this fic! a good chapter and some new info! I loved the moment with hands holding and when she was pissed that she was interrupted! i feel the jerk will make another appearance soon? thx for updating, i enjoyed the chapter!

absolutely love your story please update soon  

That bath scene.... wew that was hot af

I enjoyed it! Wow that was hot! I too wonder who opens those doors! And I am so glad sesshoumaru is going with her! She is to be shocked when kikyo will appear! Hopefully she won't be the evil witch everyone is making her! But boy will kagome hurt! She hopes to be with inu and doesn't even know! Poor her but no worries sesshoumaru is there!

Only one observation meant as advice, ocean blues is used too much. You can use synonyms for blue eyes ice colour bla bla. One thing that confused me was the tense or the writing, sometimes it was past sometimes present and even future, it was sometimes difficult to grasp. Usually it is done in one tense. Forgive me for sticking my nose, it's just advice take it or leave it. I know since I made the same mistake and my friend corected me!

I appreciate the update! I like this fic more and more! I am not a fan of fics kagome youkai but yours is turning out to be awesome! Yep a bit of hypocrite since I started a fic with kagome becoming youkai as well as a personal challenge so yours really is inspiring me to go write something for the next chapter! Thx! Wishing you good luck with everything! Take care!

I am not good at writing battles! But you have a talent! I enjoyed it a lot! And those Oni for sure were controlled! They are brainless even if super strong. I wonder if those are the ones that hurt sango or the mastermind has Oni army at his disposal? It has to be connected to her transforming! That crazy doctor can't be the only one wanting to play with them! Thx for updating! Gone reading next one! So happy for the double update! Thanks again!

hm it keeps getting better and better. I wonder how will the pack react to her change? it won't be easy, won't it? one little question, if she gained sesshoumaru's powers, youki and doesn't have her miko powers, is she as strong as he now? if so if they are of equal power how is that she could take his collar and bindings off but he himself couldn't? since this is borrowed powers or something along the lines, she became inu no?Ii know she didn't give up burned her hands but stil? hope you will explain soon. thx for the speedy update! curious for more!

Wooo! 

This story is awesome. 

I'm really enjoying where you're taking this. 

I wonder if they all meet up again? If they do I wonder how they're all going to act towards one another? can't wait to see! 

It's kind of annoying that he says her name every single time he talks to her now.... like "hi Kagome" "bye Kagome" "soooo, what you doing later kagome?"....but other then that the story is ok so far ...keep up the good work 

Awesome

Wow! What a chapter!

Interesting story. Looking forward to new updates.

Hm so this is a kagome becoming youkai fic? It seems so. The premises are interesting but the fact that deters me is how easy they caught sesshoumaru, besides he does have even poisonous breath so a muzzle wouldn't stop the gases. And venom in his claws. And a shark scientist? Neanderthals?  That have small brains no matter the evolution? And who don't have problems walking on soil not needing water? If he had such means why catch them now not earlier? He was the brains?  Of course it's fiction and your way of creating the plot but still logic is needed.  The biggest brains after human ones are canine ones from what I remember from zoology. Sharks piranhas are guided by instinct not creating intricate frankensteinish plots. But the idea is interesting and I never saw shark youkai so will give it a try! Hopefully kagome will save herself! And hope to see more behind this reasons including how they caught sesshoumaru and how are they able to block his power. Curious to see how you'll spin this! Good luck and compliments for writing this.