I'm not a fan of unresolved unhappy endings. Angst is only sweet (for me) if there is resolution, and this has none. I would prefer a continuance where Sesshoumaru pulls his head out of his arse.
Nelda (Chapter 1) - Fri 05 May 2017
He should realize he made a mistake, go back for her & no longer be able to find her. His arrogance & pride needs to be brought down.
Hmmm, I like it, but it was left really open ended. There is a climax to the story but no resolution.
Please, Please continue. I want to know why Sesshomaru is acting this way towards Kagome.
Toni (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Mar 2017
I like it I think you should continue it
Nile (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Mar 2017
Pretty good... though, definitely doesn't feel like a one-shot. It's too open in the end... but then again, sometimes that's life.
Natalia (Chapter 1) - Mon 20 Mar 2017
No! Not another unfinished one shot! No clear end and we don't actually understand all. So really hope you will add at least one more chapter to resolve it! Thx!
He called it a farce of a relationship but it seems like kagome was expecting more. I think it would be awesome if you made it to where she wound up pregnant. Then he would have to be around her more and maybe fall for her. I think that would be cool. I love the story by the way!
OMG! That was so good. Please write more of this story.
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