ummm i would have though it was obvious what happened to her scar..... it doesn't take much to put two and two together.

I love that you added the fact that magic always has a price. most people tend to forget the laws of equivilent exchange dont just apply to alchemy, but to all magic.

Crazy Kay...doesn't she know that her scar disappeared because she's changing her future??? Even if they fail in the exact same way her meddling is bound to affect the course of time in SOME way... I guess since Naraku won that explains the tainting of Kagome's reiki, it's kind of cool that even with the disguise she's still unrecognizable but I wonder what'll happen when/if she meets Sesshomaru. Will he recognize her? Will Kay try to lead Kagome to Seshomaru sooner? I think I already figured the turn of events that led to Kagome's future, but it still broke my heart to her the details revealed, specifically poor Shippo and Rin- I cant help bit feel Inuyasha had a huge hand in it, but it could be that I'm still not over the actions from the earlier chapters lol

Interesting beginning cant wait to read the rest

holy cow! that was cool. I think "kay" is kagome future self but because of the pain, she experienced she became tainted. idk but either way that was an awesome chapter I can't wait to read more please keep up the awesome work with this story it's very interesting and unique just like all your other stories.

More please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice chapter, please update the next chapter quickly! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

Nice chapter, please update the next chapter quickly! Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

Very unique, intense and passionate. Very well written and the story flows perfectly. Please continue and update soon. 

I have so many questions but I won't ask them because if I get any answer it'll be a spoiler for sure~ i will ask this though: I'm assuming that Kagome will wear a cloak for the sake of the story, but will she ever reveal herself? I figured maybe her  scent changed because shes a dark miko but I can't help  but think that at the very least Kagome would be understanding and maybe even more willing if she's st least told this miko is from the future and their imminent future if they should fail. 

That was Kagome wasn't it.

That was Kagome wasn't it.

your stories are really well thought out and written, this story is good at least so far with only two chapters it's hard to say lol but I am giving the benefit since your other story is well done. please continue to update your stories! 

What a great beginnin!!! I am going to guess that this “Dark Miko” is dear, sweet Rin because what other human would be so close to have Sesshomaru train, have a crescent necklac, and have almost unbearable sorrow upon his demis......especially since Kagome was somehow taken many years ago. Strange how Naraku would want to destroy Dark Mikos and Dark Monks though. One would think that he would welcome them into his evil realm. I guess he is jealous of anyone harboring any kind of power aside from himself.

Ohhhh!!! I like the premise thus far! This is one of the unique stories I've read throughout the years and I believe that this have the potential to be a great story. Good job so far! <3

Ooooo. Say what? Kay as in Kagome maybe?  This is too good!!

Great story, please update the next chapters quickly!

At the end of chapter 1, I thought the dark miko was Rin but now I wonder if it's really Kagome. Very interesting story, looking forward to your next update.

I admit your stories are good two and already grasp my interest! i do hope you update both of them i have been waiting for the first one, A Tale of Souls and Swords and now this one To Untwist The Chains Of Fate! wow so far 1 chapter and it already peeked my interest.. please update both soon! :) happy holidays.