You did a wonderful job to a simple suggestion. It was brilliant and the lemon scene was enthralling. Your writing skills are top-notched. You have become one of my favorite writers and I look forward to more updates to this fascinating story. Excellent writing, keep it up. Oh by the way, I love the plot and the story of course.
Maybe a little back story on Kagome and Shippo and how they ended up Sessho's home before her fateful encounter with what seems to beher destiny now. Is she going to be a normal human or is she a miko with powers that she knows nothing about yet; something like now that she is mated, her dormant powers will awaken.
Thank you for reading my ramblings. lol :)
disa (Chapter 2) - Sun 27 Nov 2016
I was so interested in reading this fanfic but then you had to have him rape her. Well good luck with the story.
Noooo poor Kagome (!_!) I know Sesshomaru-sama will fall for her, but hope she won't be too much hurt by him.
I think this will be a wonderful story (^_^) Thank you for the quick update dear~
Kagome (Chapter 2) - Sun 27 Nov 2016
Oh my!!! Needles to say my attention is captured!!
xDori (Chapter 1) - Sun 27 Nov 2016
Uh oh! Will Kagome give in easily? Hmmm. Not likely? Lol. Compliant but defiant? Interesting first chapter! Can't wait for more
smilingfool (Chapter 1) - Sat 26 Nov 2016
wow what a wonderful story line... I enjoyed it very much... Please continue I want to see what Sesshomaru has in store for Kagome. Must be a good one... lol...
Miss C (Chapter 1) - Sat 26 Nov 2016
Well this escalated quickly!!
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