I have reread reread this... so good.
I'm hanging onto my seat for more. I think its very creative with sesshomaru being some kind of agent. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Would you ever consider finishing this story? It so good
Wow. Its like Criminal Minds. Thanks for the update. So good.
Definitely a turn i didn't see coming. Keep it going!
Awesome chzpter! I hope your wrist feels better.
glad for the update looking forward to the next chapter
This story caught my intetest! Definitely wait for your next update i love your idea for this story...especially kagome being sold to naraku and needed to be rescue and sesshomaru in a secret service... whatever wil happen i just hope nothing would ever change to his love for kagome..
I like the story the way it is. I was so intereted that I started reading thinking that ther was a chapter six. I'm sure that those on FF don't have a clue as to what good really is or they would be reading on Dokuga and not FF. BTW I'm enjoying the story and wish that instead of a author's note there was another update. I also read stories on FF as well as AFF and Mediaminer nut when I want Sessh/Kag stories this is my goto place.
I like it the way you have written it. It's dark but a good story
I honestly love the way it is, please keep your story as it is. It's your FanFiction not anyone else's so make it how you like. Not all readers can be pleas, focus not on them but the ines who enjoy your story even if it only 5 people. Please keep this story how it is. I like how some parts are left out bc we are in the dark just like Kagome. She had no idea that Sesshomaru was in a special organizatio. It's ok for readers to not know things, it later gives the element of surpris.
I am confused. Did you repost this fic or is it new because I read one almost exactly like it. It goes like this
Kagome and sesshoumaru are in high school, she is hiding something
Her dad abuses her sesshoumaru doesn't know.
Her dad sells her to naraku as a slave,property
Naraku rapes her
Sesshoumaru saves her
Naraku goes after them yada yada.then he tells the school and her mom that she is a .... Bad word. Sesshoumaru protects her. The end.
No offence meant I am just curious is this the same fic or you are only writing it?
Anyway good luck!
This is a great story, it gives me thrills just by reading. Please update soon!!!
The upset you've left me in is indescribable. Kagome needs to be updated soon or I am going to lose it.
Very glad you continued. I'm hoping kagome gets out of this situation before irreparable damage is done to her...
I'm really hoping sess can figure out what's going on and help kagome... other wise, she's toast
First off good chapter I was so glad to see that you Updated and sorry about you having the flu. I hope you feel better. So in the part with InuYasha an Sesshomaru having breakfast you have (At least you eat before putting your smart enough to eat before you get your cloths on.) That was the only error I saw, other wise great chapter. Can't wait for the update.
Glad your better. Loved the effect part. Thanks for the update.
Can Sesshoumaru not use his demon hearing to find out what happening now? Too bad she cannot defend herself against her Dad. This is an interesting story and topic. I cannot wait to see what happens next. Also, I think Sesshoumaru'a mother will do a little digging of her own. Thanks for the update.
I like the tension Kimi brings into the room. Good chapter, update soon
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