I feel like you're writing some random story and only using the characters' names. Everyone is extremely out of character, which unfortunately is a huge deterrent for me. After trying to read this I feel like I felt after finishing Breaking Dawn. It's so happy that it's almost sickening.
mia (Chapter 50) - Tue 03 Mar 2009
the story has been really good so far what was done to naraku . SWEEEEEET. that was nice what you did for kanna and kagura and the kitsune in the story about kikyo kaede was right she did not belong in this lifetime. now what you did to sango and miroku waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah i will never forgive you sango was my favorite character besides sesshomaru and kagome and you are just cruel but the story besides that awesome!
Anonymous (Chapter 49) - Fri 20 Feb 2009
Waaaaaaaaaa up-up-update s-s-soooon
Maddie (Chapter 48) - Thu 12 Feb 2009
great job I love it keep up the great work and UPDATE SOOON
Who said it was to long? I'll bite their kneecaps off!! @____@ lol sorry i'm short it's about all i can do! ^_____^ I love your story and I can't wait to see what happens next.
I hope that you get better soon! Because if you stay sick i'll cry cause then i'll never know what happens!
I.S.
Maddie (Chapter 44) - Wed 04 Feb 2009
Great Job I loved It keep up the great work and UPDATE SOOOOOOOOON
ano, people are mean sometimes =P I just ignore them when that happens. I liked your little joke, i thought it was funny ^___^.
Well I hope to see when you update again, I really like this story.
Until next time,
I.S.
Maddie (Chapter 43) - Mon 02 Feb 2009
Great job this story made me sooo happy I got tears in my eyes update sooon
Oh wow! I love this story!!! I am very glad to have stumbled onto this site! ^__^ I hope that the next chapter is out soon.
Until next time,
I.S.
Maddie (Chapter 42) - Sun 01 Feb 2009
Great job update soooooooooooooooooon okay promise
Maddie (Chapter 41) - Fri 30 Jan 2009
Great now she's awake update soon
Maddie (Chapter 40) - Fri 30 Jan 2009
EVIL EVIL EVIL you stop at the worst time (pout pout pout) update soooooooooooooooooon
Maddie (Chapter 38) - Fri 30 Jan 2009
you got me crying waahhhh poor Sesshomaru :( :(:( u-upd-d-date S-o-o-n-n-n
Maddie (Chapter 37) - Thu 29 Jan 2009
aww man you always have to stop it at the good part (pout pout pout!!!!!!!!)
Maddie (Chapter 34) - Thu 29 Jan 2009
Great Chapter are you going to do vist pt 2? update sooon
| Love this story and can't get enough of it. I read everything posted here in one go, took me a couple hours. It just tickles me that Kagome has gotten uber powerful and runs around smiting lesser demons and clay pots. I was a little sad about Inuyasha but he had it comming. So glad I looked on your profile and checked out the other places you post. There's more story!! *skips about happily and goes off to read it*
Amanda (Chapter 33) - Thu 29 Jan 2009
| Good story. Glad to see Kagura and Kanna freed from Naraku. Keep up the good work and update soon as you can.
Maddie (Chapter 32) - Wed 28 Jan 2009
wwaaa y did u have 2 stop there ( pout pout pout) keep up the good work I love this story update soon
Maddie (Chapter 30) - Wed 28 Jan 2009
great job Three months!!!! update soon
Maddie (Chapter 29) - Tue 27 Jan 2009
Go to hell Kikyo I really do hate her update soon
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