Wow! This chapter was very hot. It's like redemption for both of them. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
I tried, though i failed, to not read this specific fic. Not because of the sorry itself but maybe because the opening chapter was so unlike them. I'm glad I deducted to give it a try. They are in fact strongly like their canon counterparts, it was just a smidge difficult at the beginning. I didn't expect Kouga, but he was rather fitting because of his portrayed nature. But what an asshole and yet he's such a crucial and pivotal point of the story that plunges the two into actually moving on. I mean, thanks for writing this.
Meg (Chapter 12) - Mon 11 Apr 2016
Good god this might be the best fanfic I have ever read.
Leaora (Chapter 12) - Thu 07 Apr 2016
You should know, that I have tried (for some stupid ideal of canonical worship) to not read this story. I am soooo glad that I finally relented. I have laughed uproariously , especially during chapters six through eight. I find the tone of the story to be believable and compelling. You have created a new favorite for me and I applaud your craftsmanship! By the way, I skip nothing and quite enjoy the insights provided by the snippets at the beginning of each chapter. Please continue to write and I shall do my best to sustain you with pleas, bribes, and letters written in (artificial) blood. Anyway....if that broken window is an indicator that Kagome has been targeted by some hostiphiles, I hope they meet a bloody painful end after the requisite public humiliation as recompense for the pain suffering they are sure to cause!
Lorena (Chapter 12) - Thu 07 Apr 2016
So I apologize for not leaving a review before this, but i just found this story today so binge reading was an unfortunate necessity. You've left me on the edge with so many possibilities, but the saddest is the assurance that they'll have worse days to come. I look forward to the next chapter!
Pamela (Chapter 12) - Wed 06 Apr 2016
Very angsty I hope everything works out for them. Uh oh no condom. I'm thinking she's not going to have to worry about in vitro.
Tarajah (Chapter 12) - Mon 04 Apr 2016
This was one of my favorite chapters EVER! I can't wait to see what happens next
Ahhhh! I love it! Awesome rage fucking! Great update! At least they got past the whole indifference stage. Can't wait for more! Love your writing!
Susi8 (Chapter 12) - Sun 03 Apr 2016
I have to say I really like your story, how you write, and how you make your story flow. I'm looking forward to what comes next!
Boring!? This chapter is freaking adorable!! I'm loving this story so far I can't wait to read more tomorrow ~!
Please let them talk. Or I'm seriously going to throw things at them. And pull hair while I'm at it!
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