Holy shit.
Holy shit.
I usually review every single chapter as I go through BUT I couldn't with this one because I COULDN'T STOP READING long enough to review!
Great story, keep it coming.
How God Created Mother
Good took the fragrance of a flower, The majesty of a tree, The gentleness of a morning a dew The calm of a quiet sea, The beauty of a twilight hour The soul of a starry night The laughter of the rippling brook, The grace of a bird in flight, Then God fashioned from these things A creation like no other, And when His masterpiece was through, He called it simply...MOTHER.
Happy Mother's Day!
There are Angels God put on this Earth Who care for us and guide us. You can feel their love and gentleness as they walk through life beside us. They do great things for us every day they whisper in our ears, they even hold us in their hearts when we are filled with all our fears. They are always there to give us a hug and try to make us smile. They treat us with the respect and love, they treat us like their own child. God blessed me with an Angel, I’m proud to call my own. She’s been with me throughout my life, been with me as I’ve grown. She’s guided me the best she can, she’s taught me like no other, and I’m thankful I’m the lucky one who get’s to call her Mother
iin (Chapter 11) - Sun 08 May 2016
dunk...dunk...dunk....will there a steamy lemon?
Haha. Yay for update! I love where this is heading. Well not the Naraku part.
Pamela (Chapter 10) - Tue 19 Apr 2016
Wow! What a heated chapter. I like that Sess is showing restraint and is respecting her and allowing her to make the decision. My my but if he keeps this up she is going to jump him. Hopefully, she doesn't revert to some other man to release her tension.
This was exciting and sweet great combo. More please.
iin (Chapter 9) - Sun 17 Apr 2016
oh...it's getting hot in there...
I wanna cute but ferocious AhUn....hem...
iin (Chapter 8) - Sun 17 Apr 2016
SUSPICIOUS...WHO'S THAT? The roar....? hem...
I just found your story and read it through. Very good my question is if they are Arabian why do they speak some words Russian? Looking forward to seeing more.
Pamela (Chapter 7) - Wed 30 Mar 2016
Well, Sess seems to bit smitten with his new powerhouse. The tension between the characters is great if not a bit steamy, fans herself:)
i like where this story seems to be going and the characters. Kagome's background was interesting too. Can't wait to read how this continues. Very nice work:)
iin (Chapter 7) - Tue 29 Mar 2016
Thanks God...she's oke....
iin (Chapter 6) - Sun 27 Mar 2016
it's realy...realy...interesting...thanks
(Chapter 1) - Sun 27 Mar 2016
I'm not surprised that someone judged Kagome already without letting the story unfold lol :D
cheers jaken!
jaken (Chapter 5) - Sun 27 Mar 2016
so this chapter shows kagome is a whore.... she probably let any male do her
Halcali (Chapter 1) - Fri 25 Mar 2016
I really enjoyed 'Impromptu' and this is shaping up to be one of my favorites. Kagome & Sesshoumaru's chemistry is really something here... I love it. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Biru (Chapter 1) - Thu 24 Mar 2016
Haha this is so interesting I'm hooked! I love that you integrated Ah Un, and two stubborn people that refuse to mate, this is gonna be fun ;D I'm so excited for this fic, it seems like my new addiction now that impromptu is over :o
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