My reaction when I began reading this story: O_O
My gosh! I love this story so far; the way its coming to life is amazing. ^_^ I know you're just beginning but pretty please don't make it too tragic. (*cough, cough, the little mermaid*)
Take care and hope you update soon.
-Literary Fan
P.S. Is Sesshomaru's mother really dead or did she transform into the sea witch? (I'm asking because you mentioned she had white hair). Also does Kagome age slower than humans?