Well, that was a good start.  Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

I was hesitant to read this story because of the tragedy tag, but  I really like how it is turning out so far and can't wait for the next update. I really hope that the tragedy portion of this story doesn't mean we don't get a happy ending. Anyway, you are doing a fanatstic job so far keep up the good work.

Good luck and happy writing I wish you and yours well.