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Redemption by Bleeding_Heart

Prologue

I had to rewrite this thing because I am not yet accostomed to the process of adding a chapter and added the same one twice. Here it is again.

Prologue

In hell, it was just another day on pain and torture. The leader of hell with his crimson eyes knew the time was coming, the time for the fulfillment of the prophesy that hell would rule the earth and nothing could ever stop him from achieving it, not even god himself. The prophesy that one angel of heaven was to be taken to hell on its own will, and that the very pure soul would be tainted forever. And everyone on earth will suffer for all eternity. All he needed was a perfect pawn to make him plan complete. He already found the perfect candidate for his plan.

"Come fourth" he said. Later a dark angel appeared, he looked like an angel expect for that his wings were that of a demon, and his clothes were black with many cuts open. His long silver hair reaching to his waist and his face was the definition of perfection. "I need your you to so a job for me, and I expect it to be done soon"

As he was telling his plan to his minion, the angel was having fun with a child.

Rin was an orphan in a foster home. She had a very hard life and was left alone most of her life, but secretly she had someone who helped her a lot. She had an angel who always took care of her. And when she was alone in her room, they would have lots of fun just talking to each other. Her angel's name was Kagome. That is one thing she knew of her since she didn't want to call her angel all the time. When she was a lot younger she would tell people about her but only she could see her. But that wasn't even a problem in the first place. At least she had a best friend. She was also like the mother she never had, and even Kagome would tell her that her parents were very proud of her for being very brave toward the situation, and for her to continue to live for them.

Kagome is an angel who loves to help people. Her favorite person was Rin. She was very special and had suffered a lot but was an extremely kind hearted person. They became friends and even allowed her to see her in her physical form. Even though she could have been in heaven, she decided to be a guardian angel. She could not stand to see people suffer. She would help people here and there but when she always came to Rin all the time.

"What did you do today Kagome?" Rin would always ask when she came.

"Hmm, it was actually calm today, but how was your day?"

"I am going to change home again"

"Why, I thought that you were going to stay with the Russell's for a long time?"

"But I heard that I was going to move by them."

"I do not know that want to leave, will I still see you?"

"Of course you will, I will always protect you no matter what."

"I heard that this couple want to adopt me, at last I am going to have a mom and dad again."

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This was really short but next is longer. Any recommendations or something just write a quick review. Finally I finished my finals and am home free. I am just afraid to see the results.

INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
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