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If I Weren’t Alive by living death

In the Beginning

All I could see was him staring

down,

at me.

I was starting to lose control of every thing.

Life, Thought, and Love.

And when it finally came down to it,

all I could hear was him laughing,

as I watched the world goes dark...

{...}

When I woke up, I had I huge head eke, the size of Japan. I could not move, and I can't see two feet past my face. Every thing was still blurry. All I could still hear was him laughing, it got worse though. It keeps getting louder louder. "Holly shit, I'm going to go crazy!" Normally when I wake up I have some one right beside me. No one, not one person. No one has found me. I'm lost, and can barely move, and he is still laughing.

She tries to get up, but it's useless, she can't. She rolls helplessly over and breaks into tears. That's all you can hear, not a bird sage, the wind would not blow. You couldn't smell anything but her for miles. Her tears keep coming.

{...}

"Where is she!!!?!!! She should have been here by now. Fuck! If she cared, she would be here, not in her time." Kagome, where are you.

"Inuyasha, you should not be so frustrated she'll be back, don't worry." Songo said pleasantly.

I hope your right, because she came out of the well, she just hasn't made it here. "I'm going to go look for her."

{...}

Ok, Kagome you have been in worse places. Try again. GET UP, at lest sit up, please...for me. kamara, your talking to yourself, again. Dope. Get up, sit up, work those arms and legs. Gosh I wish Inuyasha was here. "Someone, anyone! Help." Once again I'm lonely. Just like any other day of school, and to make even more like school someone is laughing, always, and it won't get out of my head. Life is becoming more, and more hateful to me.

{...}

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