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Fate's plan at hand by demon13o

chapter one

Jay: I started reading a few challenges and this one caught my eyes so I said why not it might perk my writing skills a bit so here goes nothing.

Demon: she stayed up all night reading again oh well this challenge came from hummer! Thanks for the challenge there!

Riku: great time to kill me before I see next year

Jay: So I have 16 days till my birthday (sticks tongue out)

Riku: oh well on to the first chapter

Chapter one

~Warning~ there will be blood in this chapter, gruesome deaths and jerk alerts to be funny~

Kagome woke to a strange smell. She didn't know what it was. She tried to clear her fuzzy vision. She got out of her sleeping bag and rose to her feet. She grabbed her clothes to change for the new day. Kagome hurried though cause she sensed a very bad presence closing in on their campground. As soon as she finished getting dressed. She was dressed in her well-known green and white school uniform with the red tie. She ran back out to the area to find everyone awake and on high alert (my jerk alert is on now). Kagome looked over to Inuyasha and asked timidly, "What's wrong Inuyasha?" He looked back down at her quickly and averted his gaze back to the spot he was staring at to begin with. "It's Naraku, he coming in quick and fast," He spoke ever above a whisper. Kagome heard him though.

Kagome ran to her ratty yellow backpack and grabbed her bow and arrows. She quickly made sure her jewel shards were around her neck. 'It's been two years since that time I fell into the well and released Inuyasha from the spell he was under. We've all been through hell since we found out Naraku has hurt many people like Sango. Naraku took her family and her villagers lives and used her dead brothers body against her. Miroku with the cursed hellhole in his hand, which threatens to swallow him whole one day like his father had and his grandfather as well. Inuyasha and Kikyo had been tricked into believing that they hated each other. I broke the Shikon no tama and it is my fault that Naraku is so strong, and it is my duty to gather the shards and fix the jewel once again. We will kill Naraku even if we die trying,' Kagome thought to herself as she stared at the very things that brought this nightmare to life, the jewel shards.

Kagome sensed the shikon no tama getting closer to them. Kagome hurried up and got into position with her pouch of arrows over her back with an arrow notched into the bow. Kagome waited for Naraku to get close enough to hit him with one of her purifying arrows. Sango watched, as Kagome got ready as she held her boomerang bone ready to throw at her most hated enemy in all the lands. Miroku was ready to kill of Naraku in any way he could help kill him. Miroku watched the only woman he fell in love with stand ready to kill Naraku when he appeared. Shippo stood next to Kagome his adoptive mother, he was glad to have met Kagome and was glad she loved him as a son as he loved her as a mother. Shippo was ready to use his kitsune techniques when Naraku appeared. Inuyasha had a hand on the hilt of the tetsusiaga as he continued starring foreword into the forest.

As if on queue a horde of demons sprung forth from the forest and attacked the five victims as they stood there ready to kill. Inuyasha brought out his tetsusiaga and started swinging at the demons as Sango threw here bone boomerang at the hordes of demons. The killed many on the spot. Shippo used his foxfire to kill some of the demons, as they grew closer to them. When Naraku came into view and Kagome had her arrow notched in her bow and aimed at Naraku. She released the arrow only for Naraku to dodge it quickly. Miroku released his wind tunnel screaming, "Kazanna!" Naraku saw this and decided to use his new trick on making the monk's hellhole bigger. Naraku used his connection with the hellhole to grow.

Miroku felt the hole grow bigger and he started to panic and shouted, "Everyone move away it's growing!" They understood what and backed away except for Sango and Kirara. They stayed by him killing off the demons. All of a sudden a demon came up from behind Sango and drug it's claws threw Sango's back. Sango felt gushes of blood pour from her back quickly. Kirara saw this and ripped the demons head off and the demons blood splattered everywhere. Sango silently thanked Kirara and she re-stood and killed off more demons as the continued to get closer. A few seconds passed by and Sango fell to her knees feeling death coming for her as she slowly fell to the ground. Kirara didn't like the fact that her mistress was dieing so she kept fighting in order to end this war before her mistress dies. Too late Sango fell to the ground dead unaware of the demons closing in on her dead figure. Kirara tried to protect the fallen form of her mistress and kill the approaching demons but a demon came up from behind her and beheaded her. Kirara's lifeless body fell to the ground with a loud thump. Miroku, Inuyasha, Kagome, and Shippo all saw this and their faces showed a face of horror. A few seconds later Miroku's wind tunnel wrapped its way around his fingers quickly and swallowed him whole. The only thing left there was a giant crater.

Kagome's eyes filled with tears as she saw her friends die one by one. Kikyo came out from behind Naraku and grabbed Inuyasha without him knowing it and tried to force him into hell with her. A black hole appeared below them and was trying to swallow them like quicksand except this was slower that quicksand. Kagome was in a daze of fear, confusion, and sadness. She was so stuck in this world that she didn't sense the tentacle heading towards her until it was to late.

Shippo jumped into the way of the tentacle in order to save his mother figure. The tentacle went through Shippo, since Shippo had a small body the tentacle killed him but with Shippo's last words he spoke quietly, "Live momma live for us please don't die." That brought Kagome out of her daze and she saw her little Shippo die in front of her. She saw him covered in the crimson red color of blood and cried but it didn't last long. She rose to her feet with a new feel of power. She looked towards Inuyasha to see half of him here and half gone. She grew even angrier than ever. She looked over to the dead bodies of Kirara and Sango and the crater of where Miroku once stood, she felt grief. She glared over at Naraku with the taste of vengeance in her mouth and mind. Her miko powers responded to her new energy. Kagome used her miko powers and newfound energy to call all the shards of the shikon no tama to her. As soon as it was formed and in front of her she grabbed it and made her wish. She wished to start all over again. As soon as the wish was made she saw everything freeze and then everything disappeared. Little did she know that fates were going to twist her wish around a bit?

Jay: So readers did you like it I stayed up till 5:15 this morning to complete it and I'm pretty confided that it deserves a 10... I love typing and I pour my heart and soul into these fic's just to see if I should ever publish my almost finished novels

Demon: (whispers) she only has 7 and is still in the completing stage

Jay: (glares at demon) there you go whispering behind my back again

Demon: (sweat drops and runs away) any way readers read and review! Please and rate it if can be I know she did good on this

Riku: Sure everyone ignore her muse and helpful idea person

Jay: (locks Riku in the closet) so anyone want to see chapter two then review people review for me! And um rate it high... if it goes below a 6 I'm stopping and leaving it there on the chapter I left off on! Ja ne >^-^<

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