i loved this chapter. i hope you write more. i also hope this is not the end of the story. if it is then i'm really sad. please write more(if its not the end) and please write the other story u were talking about.

Hey
really loved your story. You've done a good job keep it up. And plz do write the new story you were talking about. lolz.

i loved this chapter even though it was a little short. please write more your stories rock

omg that was awesome. please write more chapters. i love your stories there the best. please write more soon bye.

I like it. So now that the northern lord is dead what will happen next

that was good story please write some more chapters to it

these chapters are really good. i wish i could print them out and keep it forever. but please keep writing more chapters. i wont be on for a while cuz i got to go on a school trip to chicago. so just write more so i can have more to look foward to when i get back. and it almost killed me to not be able to read the story for 3 whole days. thats how good it is so just keep writing. thanks

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

good job, and as far as the spelling and grammar are concerned great job. keep it up

these chapters were good. i hope you write more i loved them. i'm alway's looking foward to your stories. please write more soon thanks.

this fanfic is awsome! i love it.

good job that was great. it really moved me, lol but seriously it really did move my heart. please update soon

this was great. thank you for writing more. i haven't been on in a few days so it was hard for me to even think without reading your story. please write more soon. thanks

i'm glad you wrote more thanks. it was great. i almost thought that you wouldn't write more because most people dont but you did. so that makes you a good writer. i hope you keep writing more on this story thanks.

I love your stroy and I can't wait to read more. So I hope you keep up the job well done, I'm going to be sad to see when this story is done. I hope you update asap please.

please write more this was a very good story. as a matter of fact its the best i've read ever since i've been on fanfic and that was 3 months ago

I love this fic....can't wait for the next upday

I love your story! The spelling mistakes arent too bad but if you could find someone to pre-read your story they could fix the mistakes for you so you would have more time. I would be happy to do it for you as would my cat Boushii ! Email me anytime if you would like me to do that for you.

like i said before it is very good, but i have one suggestion pay more attention to when you are refering to sesshoumaru as her, lol but seriously you refer to him as her a lot i notice. alright update soon thanks.

VERY GOOD INDEED, KEEP IT UP

The story is nice but it needs a little work in the area of spelling and grammar.
I would like to read more to see where this story takes us.
Update soon...