I enjoyed their first meeting. It was cute and funny. Even at 6, she know's her own mind and is very independent. Yes, I guess my imagination needs more patience. haha
marquisha- Fri 25 Apr 2008
please please please update soon this is a great story
snowbird- Sat 19 Apr 2008
Your unusual plot and interesting beginning caught my interest. Please, another update so that we can know more of your plot. Are you going to have the reason for her blue eyes being that the jewel is within her or that she is actually the jewel itself? If she is the jewel, then she has to be kept alive to use its power. That way everyone won't be trying to cut her open for the jewel. Of course, we can't forget that immortality comes with the jewel. Look at me. My imagination is working overtime trying to read your mind. I'm anxious to know if I'm anywhere close or completely way off base.
FangedBeasty- Thu 13 Mar 2008
I love this so far. Have never seen anything like it. Plzz keep up the good work!
:)
-FangeBeasty
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