As you may or may not be aware, A Single Spark is, unfortunately, being phased out. 'A First For Everything' is one of my favourite stories and I would hate to lose the choice to read it again. I was wondering if you would mind me saving it onto my computer? Please e-mail me with your response at underwater963@aol.com. :)

Very good ^^

awesome

I love this story,. However, I think in chapter five when Sesshomaru says that he is impotent, you actually meant sterile.

OOOOHHH!!!! You go Girl!! That's the Kagome we all love, tell him like it is!!!

Somehow I managed to read this entire work in a single evening, which i think sayssomething about how amazing it is. I love your writing style, and how you managed to keep each characters unique personalities while putting them in a modern setting.
Truly excellent!

I love the story so far, I am not quite done it yet, but I wondered about something. i may be wrong, but when sess tells kags that he is impotent, that usually means he can't get it "UP" but he obviously can, so did you actually mean that sess is sterile?

I loved ur story plot but was unsatisfied with the ending for some reason, i guess i wanted the ending to be the typical exstravagent type of thing, but being different s good. Besides why did sesshomaru have to be impotent, I was expecting kagome to throw her pregnancy in sesshy's face during one of their abrupt arguments...

Cute, and very well written. Thank you.

Overall pretty good!
I thought the plot was refreshing. i swear i've read the same story 100 times, so it's nice to read something new.
to be honest I though it got a little too sarcastic. Voice can be really beneficial to a piece, but i think it became a little overpowering at the end, and you just needed to tone it down.
Overall, it was pretty good. I'm a pretty tuff grader, so i'd probably give it a B+.
good job, keep writing!

Gosh, as far as I have read of this story....I love it! This has to be one of the better fangics that I have every read! i hope to get a chance to read more,........it's funny i just did a picture that reflects this story very well. I hope i get a chance to read more fanfics like this in the future.

Peace/ Rootslove

This story is really good and I look forward to reading the sequel.

I loved the story.

Though in the chapter where Kags brought the brush to Fluffy's office she should have thrown it at him. And lets see if he can catch the object.

Later days and continue to write... your good.

very good! i loved it, i cant wait to read the next one! just one question. why is it that sessh is unable to get kagome pregnant? you never really explained it. is id a medical reason or a demonic one? great job i absolutly loved it!!

AWH!
Omg I loved this story. And though I am probally uber late at finding it and posting a review, I think the last title is fitting for a sequel.
-Nod.-
I can't wait to read more of your work!
Ja ne, for now!

Chapter 5 - impotent? impotent means unable to engage in sexual intercourse because of inability to have and maintain an erection. Did you mean sterile? Or is he a youkai and able to control his seed.

uh oh Kagome's getting in pretty deep here... watch out!!
P.S. Inuyasha's reaction on the telephone were priceless.

hahaha well done... way to bring in a reference from chapter 1. I was definitely laughing out loud at that one... oh yeah, things should get very interesting from here on out.

hahaha poor Kagome... well that's one way to treat a future boss...

Wonderfully well written! A great first chapter! I am very much looking forward to seeing how this plays out. ^.^

I LUVED IT!!! AWESOME JOB!

I LUVED IT!!! AWESOME JOB!

I thought Kagome had hickies all over her neck? Anyway, wonderful story.

Aw, happy ending...right? I know you mentioned why you wrote Kagome the way you did, but man I still wanted to drop kick her half the time. Fun story overall though!

“Allow me to ride you home, Kagome,” he said smoothly.

That, was too funny. Intentional or not, I loved it!

Sess, impotent? BLASPHEMY!

This is a vary good fanfiction
keep it up.

that was an awsome story i loved it ^^ well done

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!
There has to be a sequal... wow that was hot! Emotional, imaginative, and HOT!
very well done!!!

~Sandreline

hey in the sequal u should make it that he "accidently" gets her preganant, and you could say that he slipped or something XD which causes him to stress and her mood swings . hai xD

hey just letting you know how much i loved you story. it was perfect. i would realy like to know if there is a sequel yet?
it would be wonderful to know.
loved it,
mari

you said that this story is your first fanfic, well you did a hell of a good job, (i'm jealous, lol), bravo!

you said that this story is your first fanfic, well you did a hell of a good job, (i'm jealous, lol), bravo!

in some of the sex scenes you say something about their bodies withering, but i think the word you're meaning to use is "writhing". figured i'd let you know so you could change it...

luv it!

luv it!

Kagome is now my hero. That bar scene was perfect. damn. Revenge never tasted so sweet.

Nice story.

really liked the story and Sess's personality.

When I read this story I couldn't help but laugh and cry at the right times. You are a really gifted writer. Have you ever tried to write something of your own? I think you would do great with a romance novel.

Cahpter 7 with the whole brush scene...priceless! Love this story, keep up the good work.

Wow, i really loved your work. It was wonderful. It was inspiring. Simply put, i adored how you portrayed Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I love the pairing in general, but i loved the spark you ignited between them. Absolutely wonderful. I also loved that they were constantly quipping back and forth at each other like an old married couple. I'm loving that Kagome wrote out their story in the end, i was wondering if she was going to almost through out the whole book, and then having Sesshoumaru calling his own love life smut. Priceless. Like he had just noticed how he was living his life. I really loved the story and keep up the good work, i'll read your other stories in the next few days and tell you what i think. Love......