Reviews for In the beginning by Deaville

kotainuchan- Tue 29 Jul 2008
Boudicca sp?..... haha i swear i don't just read this for the trivia questions, i'm a research biologist, but i have to admit history is kinda like my hobby. I'm really diggin the story hummm twisty and turney.

Megz- Sat 19 Jul 2008
So far so good. Better than anything I could have ever done. Keep up the good work and update soon.

Samela- Wed 09 Jul 2008
Great story! Your portrayal of Sesshoumaru its the best I'ue ever read.

kotainuchan- Tue 08 Jul 2008
hummm im not sure about the attack, but Isoroku Yamamoto was responsible for planning the pearl harbor attack, and was thwarted at the battle of midway. wow that chapter really brought some things together in my mind.

kotainuchan- Fri 04 Jul 2008
Well, I still love it, but if the beginning is going to be so confusing then your going to have to update a lot faster and answer some of the questions.Cause Ise cornfuseed.

Mostly interesting- Wed 02 Jul 2008
Hey hello to you there , I don't know if I may say this but any way ... my first lenguage isn't english is spanish so well if I have a lot of mistakes in both gramar or spelling well my humble apologies ... In any case I have been reading these kind of fanfiction for almost a year and some have been interesting and other well just are bordering in absurd. By the way yours is just great!!! It has a plot and a lot of planning, good writing and the "actual characters" aren't OOC so well you are the first damn person good enough to make me review unfortunately today and just today I found your fanfic and well I read it in only one shot ( guess the hour... hahaha) and with that I figuerd that you upload every what one month and a half so well I'll be intrigued with the outcome of this fic for a lot of time if it is as long as it seems . Oh! I forgot to tell ya... the thing that makes this fic o soo damn good is the fact that I can't figure out easily were are you leading it so congratulations and keep it up.

If you are needing any help or plot suggerences you may contact me also if you are in need of a beta, cause well it seems you don't have one cause well you never mention having one as all the other writers do ( and if you have one I didn't mean any offence ), you can also contact me for that .

Thanxs for doing this story

And U can call me Ninexpert ( and old used nick I have never used in this universe well ... let's give it a shot )

And finally ( I really made you read hope you did>) GOODBYE

Mostly interesting- Wed 02 Jul 2008
Hey hello to you there , I don't know if I may say this but any way ... my first lenguage isn't english is spanish so well if I have a lot of mistakes in both gramar or spelling well my humble apologies ... In any case I have been reading these kind of fanfiction for almost a year and some have been interesting and other well just are bordering in absurd. By the way yours is just great!!! It has a plot and a lot of planning, good writing and the "actual characters" aren't OOC so well you are the first damn person good enough to make me review unfortunately today and just today I found your fanfic and well I read it in only one shot ( guess the hour... hahaha) and with that I figuerd that you upload every what one month and a half so well I'll be intrigued with the outcome of this fic for a lot of time if it is as long as it seems . Oh! I forgot to tell ya... the thing that makes this fic o soo damn good is the fact that I can't figure out easily were are you leading it so congratulations and keep it up.

If you are needing any help or plot suggerences you may contact me also if you are in need of a beta, cause well it seems you don't have one cause well you never mention having one as all the other writers do ( and if you have one I didn't mean any offence ), you can also contact me for that .

Thanxs for doing this story

And U can call me Ninexpert ( and old used nick I have never used in this universe well ... let's give it a shot )

And finally ( I really made you read hope you did>) GOODBYE

iloveprettysilverhair- Wed 02 Jul 2008
I very much enjoy your writing; it's fabulous! You left me at the edge of my seat this time! Great job ^_^ I can't wait until we get some sess/kag action; all in due time I suppose :)

Zoku- Tue 01 Jul 2008
Amazing. O_O I love it;. Will you be moving it to another site when this one "closes"? I hope so, and I also hope that you will inform us when you do. Thank you for the great beginning to what seems to be well on its way to being a great story. I look forward to the rest.
Sincerely,
Zoku

Echo Huntress- Tue 01 Jul 2008
Of course, FATE would have it that I stumble upon your wonderful story, love it, cherish it, and desire to read no other, only to be stopped by the biggest cliffie that this little story could have! Reading this story and being stopped at this chapter just sums my life up in a nice little package with pretty pink metallic bow.

My life is a joke.

I hope that you're not long between updates...I don't know that I'll survive that long...*cough cough* my world is spinning...my life span depends on the frequency of your updates....

echo huntress- Tue 01 Jul 2008
I'm running out of chapters to read and I must say I don't like it....the running out of chapters part. This story is very interesting and I can't wait to see how it all falls together. Granted, I'm only on chapter 12, but still. You've captured another fan!

echo huntress- Tue 01 Jul 2008
I'm running out of chapters to read and I must say I don't like it....the running out of chapters part. This story is very interesting and I can't wait to see how it all falls together. Granted, I'm only on chapter 12, but still. You've captured another fan!

iLoveFluffy- Fri 30 May 2008
I really appreciate your story. Its a totally new and refreshing intake on sesshoumaru's life, although Kagome's role is taking a little longer to be established. But i wont say i havnt been warned about your long story. Which i love by the way. I like having so many questions. It just means that the story is complicated; it keeps the reader on the edge of their seat waiting for something interesting to happen or more answers revealed. I'm in for the long haul. Just hoping you would update soon! =]

kotainuchan- Tue 22 Apr 2008
I'm just so darn confused....... 0_0 I really feel like I'm missing some piece of the puzzle that makes this all fit together. I'm guessing that you'll be explaining the whole period of time between jumping into the lake and then being at the Western castle, and his father who I thought died in the other world or something maybe. Ohhh God it hurts, I have to stop now I feel like I'm in organic chemistry all over again. Kinda get it, but not really, and will probably fail the test.

iloveprettysilverhair- Tue 22 Apr 2008
This piece of fan fiction is very well written, I'm sorry that I haven't looked at it sooner. I know all too well what it's like not to have reviews sometimes, but if writing makes you happy, then keep on going ^_^ Perhaps soon we can see some Kag/Sess interaction of any kind, maybe that's why there is a lack of response ::shrugs:: no idea. But people are missing out by not reading this; I'm really enjoying the take on Sesshoumaru's past! Keep up the great work, I'll be sure to add this to my list of reccommended reading!

Lady Sere- Tue 01 Apr 2008
The story is good, even if it hasn't yet had much interaction between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. It keeps you in suspense, and on the very edge. I think it explains the hatred also between Sesshoumaru, and Inu Yasha also.

GinaBristow- Fri 28 Mar 2008
This was no duel... it was a fight to the fucking death. Sorry that was just what popped up in my head when I read the last bit. This isn't really a review just a here I am to let you know I'm reading cause I don't really review till the end. I keep coming back though and that should count for something.

snowbird- Sun 16 Mar 2008
I just discovered your story and read all 10 chapters. I must say, your approach on Sesshoumaru is very unique. I've never read him portrayed like this before. You've got me interested. The story so far seems so hauntingly sad with lots of unanswered questions. Such as: Who's Corran and how did they meet? I got the impression he's a figure from Hades since everything burns where he steps. What happened to Oro? Who is this mysterious enemy? Unless I misunderstood, his first "father" was not his blood father. Then how did he end up being raised by someone other than he and Inuyasha's father? Somewhere along the way he had to have met up with his real father to know of Inuyasha and grow to hate him. There's the empty Western palace puzzle, too. Also, you've got me curious about his dead wife. I'm anxious to read more about his past. You see, you've opened Pandora's box of mysteries and unanswered questions. I'm glad you gave him his arm back. I hate a one-armed Sesshoumaru. Some writers leave him that way or at least almost to the end. I like it near the beginning like you did. Maybe they don't realize he got it back in the manga along with a new sword "Bakusaiga" (spelling - something like that). Will this new vendetta and surge of coming alive again bring back his powers? And maybe by falling in love with Kagome will completely bring him back? Chapter 10 only revealed a small part of the plot along with more questions. You know you've got me good and hooked to the end. My head won't quit spinning until all the questions have been answered and the mysteries solved. P.S. I like the little bits of information at the end of the chapters.

kotainuchan- Mon 10 Mar 2008
welll you have already started the whole Kagome discovering the past thing so it would be kinda weird if you just abandoned it.

SabakuMoon- Sun 09 Mar 2008
GREAT!!!! Love this story. And I think you should continue writing about Kagome finding out about Sess's past or you can do both present day plot advancement and Kagome discovering Sesshomaru’s past at the same time.

LadyVinicia- Sat 08 Mar 2008
Alternating between past and present is generally the best way to go- that way, we get to see what's going on in both areas, without having to keep rereading things we've forgotten.

kotainuchan- Fri 29 Feb 2008
hummm Axis Sally..... that one's harder. She was a radio broadcaster for the Nazi's or something I think. Anyway sorry to hear about your accident that's kinda messed up. I can't wait for the plot to arrive in the next chapter :)

kotainuchan- Fri 29 Feb 2008
Ahh that's an easy one Marguerite de Valois. The story is great so far. I have to say that it seems like I read a lot of the "same" stories over and over again....or at least ones that seem the same, but this is very original. Please update soon.

Meitenshi- Fri 29 Feb 2008
Fan-fucking-tastic if you don't continue this fic I will personally come find you and force you to, though from your profile it seems like i wouldn't have to but still heed my warning.... HEED IT! =^.^=

MS Cascata- Mon 11 Feb 2008
Marguerite de Valois, wife of Henry de Navarre (later known as Henry IV), Queen of France and Navarre.

Great story you have here. But with the delays in updates, it is a bit hard to keep up; I am constantly re-reading chapters.

Still, I understand your reasons (I am a single motherand Undergraduate only one term in for my BSA).

Keep up the good works though. I do enjoy your writing! :)

~Merci!

MS Cascata- Mon 11 Feb 2008
Marguerite de Valois, wife of Henry de Navarre (later known as Henry IV), Queen of France and Navarre.

Great story you have here. But with the delays in updates, it is a bit hard to keep up; I am constantly re-reading chapters.

Still, I understand your reasons (I am a single motherand Undergraduate only one term in for my BSA).

Keep up the good works though. I do enjoy your writing! :)

~Merci!

Trice- Sat 09 Feb 2008
I find reading your story very interesting. It is a lot different than what I originally expected. I am enjoying reading the history of how Sesshoumaru came to be what he is today. I think it gives this story its edge and twist. I enjoy your sense of humor as well, this story is a real easy read. I look forward to reading how this story developes.

zenfluence- Sat 09 Feb 2008
Marguerite of Valois. To be married to Henry of Navarre. To end the war of the three henrys. The day eventually turned into St. Bartholomew's day massacre. The forced wedding was apparently planned by Cathrine D'Medici

enough??
Thx to AP Euro, I know too much about French Wars... ugh..

~zen
P.S. Luv the story

amadoni- Sat 09 Feb 2008
St Bartholomew Massacre was the day which Catherine de Medici order her son Charles IX to kill all the French protestants. Anyway, love this story, your style, and creativity. Update soon.

Kagome357- Sat 09 Feb 2008
I've just started reading this story and so far I'm really enjoying it. Let me get caught up...

sweetest angel- Sat 09 Feb 2008
it's an interesting story so far... How many time before Sess and Kag would be in the same time? They'll meet? I can't wait.
Please update soon

Kyuthe- Mon 14 Jan 2008
I read this fic yesterday, and it has stuck with me enough that I had to tell you about it. The possiblities are great. I couldn't remeber the name of this fic, and it was really bothering me because I really wanted to keep reading more.

Deep inside me there is this urge (upper intestin/diaphram region) that NEEDS to know what will happen when Kagome meets up with Sesshoumaru. That little urge has been interrupting my thoughts all day: 'Will Kagome be able to interviene in time?' or 'Will it even make a difference--Sesshoumaru has been through so much...(insert pang in that aformentioned area)' .

I'm like worried and waiting and pining away here for the next chapter. Way to make the characters real!
THanks for posting.

kotainuchan- Sat 12 Jan 2008
Hummm wish i knew i always did suck at history....Davy Crockett maybe?? he died at the Alamo though... that's in Texas I dunnknow. Anyways this story is great please update soon.

Mutnodjmet- Fri 11 Jan 2008
This is something quite different. It has got me hooked; now that means you must update soon.

There are so many questions that need answers about Sess' past and his future.

(NOW GET TO CRACKING *evil grins*) Really...just kidding.

*hugs and smiles*

vicki patterson- Thu 10 Jan 2008
love it, great story.

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