OOOOO..Please do finish. I really got into your story. Actually, I've read almost all your stories so far. You're very imaginative. If you gave a test, I'm sure to past!
Please continue.
dearestsesshy- Mon 30 Jun 2008
Dis fic is sooo good. Please update soon ps. Do ya kno when sunset miko is gonna update she who the prophecy fortold pps. Luv ya name
cassandra- Fri 20 Jun 2008
please update your story really soon i reall like it so far.
Omfg this is sooo good plz write more i love it its sooo good i like it alot a first i thought ut would be like the movie Grease but it wasn't and i happy thank you for writeing this it is really good seriously
I realized I was a couple of chapters behind, but finally got a chance to sit down and read. It is coming along so nicely! You have so perfectly captured the silly drama of high school, emotional high and lows, etc. but without falling back to annoying stereotypes. Looking forward to the next chapter! *wink*
I love this fic! Keep up the good work. Now that I found this fic I'll keep up with it 'till the end. ^-^
He he, I just read this fic for the first time, and I'm totally impressed. I've only read one other teacher/student story that was more than a one-shot, and this one outstrips it by far. Great job! I was nearly giggling with glee Kagura got her ass-beating. Poor Naraku! I pity that guy, at least here. It's nice to see him portrayed as pretty decent guy, I hope he stays that way. And I looved the room service part! Hilarious! You are truly evil for cutting the story off right there where you did, though. Evil, I say! EEEEEEEEEEEVIIIIIIIIIIL! Bwahahahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!
^-^ Update soon!
Niasha- Wed 11 Jun 2008
Room Serrrviicccccccccceeeeeee
Connie- Tue 10 Jun 2008
NEED A S-E-X THEM OR I WILL GO CRAZZY.
Vicious Grin- Tue 10 Jun 2008
"ROOOOM SEEERRRRVIIIICEEEEEEE!!"
OH MY GOD!!!
*dies*
ahahahahahaha
YAY!!!! Sesshomaru Is So Smart!! And Getting a Female Shaperone 2! Nice 1!!!! I Hope Every1 Has Fun On This Trip!! Though....It Also Means Kagura Could Just Show Up There, Right? She's Only Suspended From School! ....Uh-Oh....(Laugh) Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!!
Kagome-Chan
Nikki- Wed 16 Apr 2008
Wow I like that one. But it can't be over can it. I mean I know that Kagura will want to get him back at him and kagome will want to beat that crap out of her again right?
Ice_Angel- Sat 12 Apr 2008
Aww... That was so kawaii! KAWAIINESS TEW DA MAX!!! lolz I just love this story! Please update soon! I'll be waiting for the next chapter!
Rin Shii- Thu 10 Apr 2008
Curse you iloveprettysilverhair, because of your story, I had naughty dreams about my teacher, reminiscent of the story line of your fanfic. Oh my gosh, I couldn't stop blushing in class, and he eventually if I was sick and needed to go to the nurse. I was so embarrassed.
silver silence 89- Wed 09 Apr 2008
Awesome story. Can't wait for an update. Really juicy stuff......
Oh My Gosh!!!! This Story Is So0o0 Good!! Kagura Can Go Jump In a Hole! (Laugh) Please Update As Soon As U Can!!!!
Kagome-Chan
Vicious Grin- Wed 09 Apr 2008
WHOOOOO!!!!!!!
he better know what he's doing!
:P
wow, really good job on this fanfic. hopefully you'll continue it.
snowbird- Sat 09 Feb 2008
I was right! It was Naraku. I feel sorry for him. He evidently cares for that witch and for her to treat him like that. Kagome and Sesshoumru should be more careful than they're being. They should not be taking chances like that on school property or anywhere public. In order for people to believe that they are not a couple, they have to behave appropriately. They must be more careful in the future and make anything Kagura or Naraku say sound unbelievable and rediculous.
Okay...I think I see what Kagura is up to. I believe she staged that scene in the car sreaming Sess' name. She and Naraku was in the car getting it on and either by chance or on purpose she may have seen or knew that Kagome would be walking by the car and she purposely screamed Sess' name to make it seem like he was in the vehicle with her. She could be also using Naraku because she knew that by calling out Sess' name while screwing him, he would get angry and go after Sess. Calling Kags out was just a given.
Then there is the possiblity that Naraku and Kagura are in this together to ruin Sess and Kags.
Those are my theories. Nice chapter...update soon.
*hugs and smiles*
Beii16- Fri 08 Feb 2008
hehe well that was a fun chapter I was a little worried when kagome and sesshomaru were in the class room alone together I thought something bad was going to happen like kagura standing outside with a teacher or something listening in but anyway I thought it was really cute and I hope the setback is just minor although I somehow doubt it keep up the good work and can't wait for the next update
It was too good to be true *shake my head* All was good fine now and the bitch of Kagura had to come in the middle again...OOOh I can wait when she will recieve what she deserve *evil laugh*
Well great chapter, really, I just can't wait for your next one. Please update soon!!!
Nice chapter...so who was in the car with Kagura? Maybe Naraku ;)
This probably will be revealed in another chapter and where is Naraku? Hmmm...nice writing.
Nikki- Sun 27 Jan 2008
Good job on the chapter I really liked it even if I did not get the big fight sceen. but what you did was perfect. but please tell me that Kagura will get hers not just the beating that Kag gave her. PPPPPLEASE. Well I saw that you are redoing some of your story's but please don't touch not soon forgoten. That one needs no improvment. That is also the one who got me hooked on your writing. Well keep up the great work.
sharilynn- Sun 27 Jan 2008
haha thats really funny i think you should keep on writing i think if i did it with my teacher it would not be the sex part embarssing it would be going back to school lol.
Sharilynn
Vicious Grin- Thu 24 Jan 2008
Well... hey. hahahahahaha! [loved the title]
Now that we all know how to correctly give a blow job... XP
t'was a lovely chapter! You should write another one... and include Kaguras second ass beating!
yes, yessss???
:D
JUST DESSERTS!
Beii16- Thu 24 Jan 2008
awwww yay! I'm so happy they worked things out if they didn't I must say I probably would have been a bit upset but needless to say I can't wait to see what happens next you are a really great writer and I look forward to the next update.
Lady Kubira- Thu 24 Jan 2008
*folds wings back and they glow brightly before leaving just a tattoo looking marking on her back* Sometimes I forget how large my wings are. Must be my old age. Hmm this year i will be 2400 years. Loved the chapter and I cant wait to see what is in store for our two love birds. I hope you bring in some more challenging events for the two and some more juicy citrus and lemon action. I commend you on your research its always good to get it done right. Can you even leave a hickey there. Post soon. *leaves a silver and golden feather for iloveprettysilverhair.* Just to say good job and keep it up.
snowbird- Thu 24 Jan 2008
A wonderful, beautiful chapter. I'm glad He stopped from going all the way to completion with her. I agree with his reasoning. She needs more time and confidence which I say she got PLENTY of with the BJ. Your description made me hungry! hahaha
They are in a dangerous situation right now and a very dangerous person knows - Kagura. I just know she's not done yet. She'll come up with something to get back at both of them. I just hope his career is not ruined. Worse, he could be put in jail!
That was a great chapter! I was jumping up and down and squealing like a school girl when they made up *grin*
I'm anxious to see what Kagura *cough*
bitch *cough* will do next since I'm sure she will not stop there.
I can't wait to read more of your story...please please update really soon!!!
Sarah- Sun 20 Jan 2008
D8 Oh. My. God. Please~ tell me your gonna fix this? D8 I know that Sesshy would never do something so...low as to sleep with Kagura, but your little story is totally POINTING in that direction. D8 You've made me hate Kagura so much that I'm actually quivering in my chair with the need to smash my computer. Please, please, please~ reveal in this next chapter what a lying whore Kagura is and have her reputation shredded. You know, friends leave her, everyone sees her as the school slut, Sesshoumaru vows never to talk to her again, much less BELIEVE any nonsense that spews from her diseased mouth. Kagome will learn the truth and though she'll promise not to strike the bitch again, she'll totally ignore and hate her forever and continue on with Sesshoumaru.
Oh yeah, and Kouga needs to be punished as well. D8
All in all though, great story so far XD
Beii16- Sun 20 Jan 2008
omg your killing me with the cliff hanger don't get me wrong i'm happy that they are finally going to sort things out but just ahhhh please update soon for my sanity
I need this updated. I know, I know, you must be sick of people demanding things of you - but really. I need something to read and guess what? This is it!
Haha, I'm just kidding (sorta). I would just like to say I love Kagome in this. The kicking of Kagura's ass? Priceless.
Vicious Grin- Fri 18 Jan 2008
I don't think Kagura was punished enough.
:D
...maybe something along the lines of being 'accidentally' pushed off a cliff? yes? yessss???
:D
haha. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Mhhhm! Will they make up? Will Kagome believe Sesshomaru when he tells her he didn't screw Kagura? Will he, in return, believe her when she tells him they where set up by Koga and Kagura? And if they make up... they still will be facing a forbiden relationship. Complicated! I like it!!!!
Lady Kubira- Fri 18 Jan 2008
I am most displeased with being left hanging! Though I had a suspicion it was not Sess in the car but damn the cliff hanger! *crosses her arms and flaps her wings in anger at having to wait.* Hurry and post the next chapter! Please!
sharilynn- Fri 18 Jan 2008
man this story is geting really really good oh and i love dat fight man she kicked some ass so p;ease keep on writing i hope they get back together
Sharilynn
AHAHAHAH!!! How can you let us there?!?? please please update soon!!!!!!
by the way, good chapter ;P
snowbird- Fri 18 Jan 2008
Whoopee! Yahoo! Kagome really whipped her ass. Loved it. Yes, hopefully Kagome and Sesshoumaru can set aside their jealous emotions and have a heart to heart talk. I have a suspicion that Naraku was the male in the back seat with Kagura.
I had another thought about Kagura in the car and yelling out Sess' name, maybe she was jacking herself off and was thinking of Sess at the time. Most men do not like the idea of one calling out another man's name during sex unless they don't care. We all know that Kagura can be a bitch and a slut. She deserved the beating she got at the hands of Kags. I hope issues are resolved between Kags and Sess. They need to develope some sort of trust and communication between each other. Update soon :)
Good chapter...*hugs and smiles*
Kawaii_Kilala- Thu 17 Jan 2008
wow! she totaly blew up ate kagura! Kagura really deserved it though...tricking kagome like that! shame on her! lol
finaly! i was wondering if sesshoumaru would run in on them, lol
finally is right! they should talk somethings out!now, will sesshoumaru get mad at kagome, or will he tell her the truth, or will he tell her that he did have sex with kagura? And how could he just stand there while she cries! Pft!
lol,TTFN!
joanne
Kiyoko-chan- Thu 17 Jan 2008
OMG! your story was so amazing, it was breath-taking i cant wait to read on, please oh please just hurry up and finish it!
its so amazing update soon
stomponfrogs- Thu 17 Jan 2008
This story has a lot of potential, but I'd thought I'd let you know that in Japan, you're considered a minor until the age of 20, not 18.
Nikki- Thu 17 Jan 2008
WOW that was good. See I told you I was going to review LOL. I just love how Kagura got her ass kicked. That was great. Now it is time for the talk. I would love to see sesshomaru's facwe when she said that. Plus finding out that his phone was messed with. HEE HEE that is going to be so much fun. Kagome should slap him just for the sake of it. He should not come out unscathed. Can't wait for your next chapter.
Peaches- Wed 09 Jan 2008
Hey i liking the story , cant wait for the next update. I would so totally kick Kagura's ass for that... but we would just have to wait and see what happens in the next chapter...
Many blesses with your story.
~Miss Peaches~
snowbird- Tue 08 Jan 2008
I am so hoping that was not Sesshoumaru, just Kagura calling out his name by pretending the male she was with was him. I can only hope. Whatever, poor Kagome will still believe it to be him because she did not see in the car. It seems the two of them are really going to go through hell with Kagura as the Devil. I hope that when it all comes out in the open that she and Kouga are beaten so low physically and mentally that it's a long time before either see daylight. Ohhhhhhh, I'm so mad!
PLease update!!!!!!!!!!
I gotta know what happens next!
Nikki- Mon 07 Jan 2008
OMG poor Kagome. I feel so bad for her. The poor girl can't catch a break LOL. That was great. I wonder who was in the car with her. It has to be either naraku or Koga. I doubt Sesshomaru would do Kagura. But you never know. I and glad you passed your test. A good teacher is a hard thing to come by these days. Oh and I am glad you loved the movie. I thought you would like it. Hope you holidays went well and hope to see an update soon.
sharilynn- Mon 07 Jan 2008
omg this is so good please write another one i give you all my votes.
Sharilynn
Vicious Grin- Mon 07 Jan 2008
Oh, the torture you put those two through! haha I LOVE IT!
but I think the little sex part was the last straw. Kagome better start kicking ass!
Hmm...I think Kagura was banging someone else and had Sess on the brain. I think she called out his name because she was pretending that the male she was banging was Sess. Men can be such dogs. Besides if Sess is so concerned about his reputation he would not be having sex with a student on campus in said student's vehicle because of the possibility of being caught. It makes sense that he wanted to have dinner with Kags in an out of the way place so that they would not be seen but does not make sense that he would have sex on school grounds...so I just know it was not him in that car with Kagura on that premise alone.
Short but great chapter...update soon. *hugs and smiles*
shikon goddess- Sun 06 Jan 2008
That was awful. I feel really bad for her, so much for Kagura being her friend. Hope that you update soon
alatera- Sun 06 Jan 2008
I really don't want it to be him as the title of a chapter said what's in a name. Well even if it is (no,no)I'd really like Kagura to be decked by Kagome in the next chapter or so. Either way she needs to be decked . I do not want it to be him though. Kagome maybe depressed but she will be angry and I hope causes a big ruckus with it where answers come out into the open ( still don't want Sesshomaru to do that with Kagura , Naraku or someone else is fine).
marquisha- Sun 06 Jan 2008
please please update the story i can't wiat to see what will happen next
marquisha- Sun 06 Jan 2008
please please update the story i can't wiat to see what will happen next
imanewme- Sat 05 Jan 2008
Wow. You really have captured the "Grease" motif, and yet, you make it your own. High School! *tsk* Wow.
snowbird- Sat 22 Dec 2007
Oh you're evil! Letting Kagura and Kouga do that to Kagome. Now Sesshoumaru is going to be so hurt and angry at her. And he won't believe her. Evidently Kouga was in on Kagura's plan. Hopefully something will happen to cause one of the evildoers to confess to Sesshoumaru. In the meantime, they're going to suffer and probably draw further apart before this happens. I feel so sorry for them. Don't let them be in pain for too long, please.
I loved this chapter, but then you already knew that. Can't wait to see if Kagura's meddling gets found out.
Nikki- Thu 20 Dec 2007
OMG that is a new one of having Koga and Kagura pair up. LOL it was funny but as I have come to expect with you writing there will be some major heart breaking in the next chapter. I con't wait. You did a job well done. Oh how did the test go?
Hmm...what devious little plans has Kagura got up her sleeves?
Nice chapter. *hugs and smiles*
awesomeness- Wed 19 Dec 2007
love this chapter! what's up with kagura? why does she have to make things so hard, please update soon :]
Kimarya- Thu 29 Nov 2007
Is this fanfic patterend after the movie Grease?
Wow. great fic. I love the storyline and the flow and pretty much everything.
Wow. great fic. I love the storyline and the flow and pretty much everything.
snowbird- Wed 28 Nov 2007
Oh my. What a tangled web emotions can weave. I like that you're slowly building up the plot. Makes it more interesting. So, Kagura may cause problems. I have to agree that a real nice Naraku just does not seem right. He's better with a bad boy image. But not too bad, please?
Nikki- Wed 28 Nov 2007
It was good but it also felt a little forced. But I still liked it. Now how is Kagura going to screw things up. I wonder. Can't wait for your next update. Oh and good luck on your test.
snowbird- Thu 22 Nov 2007
Oh man, you really pulled a fast one! I would never have thought of him being a teacher in a million years! But I'm glad he is. It just makes everything so much more complicated and fun. Oh the twists and turns that's going to be woven. I can hardly wait. I'm glad Naraku's one of the gang. I get tired of him always being the bad guy. He's a fascinating character. I already know who's going to be coupled with who unless you plan to deviate from the usual coupling except for Sess/Kag of course. As for the others, it might add an extra bit of spice if the coupling did not follow the norm. Anyway, whatever you have in mind. I'm sure it will still be enjoyable.
Holy-crappo-moly. That was tottally unexpected, and Kagura's a truley ginormous BITCH for doing that to Kagome. She needs to go crawl to a guillotine and let Kagome do the honors, or me for that matter. *Sigh* My rant is over. This story is awesome, keep it up!
~EOS~
twilightluver95- Fri 09 Nov 2007
yay you updated!!!!anyway i really like plz get them together soon!!!: )
Oh. Oh My. I loved it! **squee!!** Having Sesshoumaru as a teacher was completely unexpected and so original when twisted in with Grease parts. I can't wait for more. It's sure to be interesting.
Man, you're right. I didn't see that one coming. It was great. It kind of brought back memories of my high school days. I sort of was liking a guy that was a jock and two grades ahead of me. I was just a freshman. His sister and I were friends and she had a mean streak. After she realized that I had a crush on her brother, she set me up big time and I was never so humiliated in my life. I thought that I would never live that one down. I still cringe just thinking about it. *ugh*
Loving your story.
*hugs and smiles*
Nikki- Fri 09 Nov 2007
WOW that was so left feild. I like it. I dod not expect that to happen. I am glad the A-Un thing made ya laugh. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
I have not seen Grease in a long time, but your story sounds like it might be fun to read. Update soon.
Well done!
*hugs and smiles*
Nikki- Wed 07 Nov 2007
This one is going to be intresting to say the lease. But here is a question is A-Un going to be grease lightning? LOL That would be funny if he was. I t has been so long since I have seen grease that it is hard to remember what happens. Well I can't wait to see where you will go with this. But I also hope you update not soon forgotten soon.
marquisha- Tue 06 Nov 2007
so glad that u update the story i'm so glad happy happy happy and hyper sugar is really good and i just luv that u update hehe
maquisha- Fri 02 Nov 2007
please ukpdate soon will kagome and sesshoumaru meet in the next chapter i can't wait to see what will happen and this is a really good story line
maquisha- Fri 02 Nov 2007
please ukpdate soon will kagome and sesshoumaru meet in the next chapter i can't wait to see what will happen and this is a really good story line
dw- Sun 28 Oct 2007
great story keep it going. let me gess there going to end up going to the same school to gether and stuff will start from there right. still great story.
sharilynn- Sun 28 Oct 2007
this is really good is it a new one damn your good,man i was wondering about the kissing with the bottom lip thing who thought of that cause its totally popular lol,well please please please write somemore.
Sharilynn
i like it update soon
marquisha- Sat 27 Oct 2007
plwasse please please update the story soon i can't wait to see what will happen next i hope u update
Hi! This is some great stuff! It almost reminds me of the beginning of the musical Grease. I can't wait to see what you have in store for everyone. Later!
Kimarya- Sat 27 Oct 2007
I really like this fanfic, for all of the only one chapter so far. Is this fanfic on fanfiction.net? Because if it is, that means I can get automatic updates when you update... Which is a hint to write more...
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