Wow!

would you like me to Beta Read. This is full of errors and it makes a really good story slightly unreadable.

Hello,

First, let me say that I'm enjoying this story. It would, however, be even better if you asked for the help of a Beta Reader. There are numerous spelling and gramatical errors that detract from the flow of the story. For example, in the description you've written "demonds" instead of demons. That error alone might make a potential reader pass your story by.

Good luck!

Meara

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wow,
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Holy $#!* !!!! Run Kagome!
Marvelous story! I eagerly look forward to more.

dat was good please update really soon

Me Like ... Cool And Interesting Plot Idea ... Update Soon!