Continue this, Please! I really like it and want to know what happens!

I think that this is s great fanfiction but it would be better if the chapters were and ittsy bittsy longer.

chaos

please we want to read more please update soon very good
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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

you neeed to set ur words right!?

I like the idea you have for the story. However your grammar and spelling leave a lot to be desired. It made it very hard to read. I had to give up doing so. Maybe you should get a beta before you continue on with your story.

Hh...Other than the typos and miss spelled words i like the general idea of this story. Please post he next chapter soon.

Chaos

I cnat wait to see what happens
gret story update soon please

Good story, and a great first chapter. Word of advise though...get a beta. A lot of spelling errors which may turn off readers and have them miss your story.

Jaded

i hope u update the story soon i can't wait to see what will happen to kagome

Keep going and make the chapters longer please ^_^