I really do like this story but again I think you can take it to new level if you work on it. I can't wait for the next update so please hurry.

I really do like this story but again I think you can take it to new level if you work on it. I can't wait for the next update so please hurry.

Well, you did a fantastic job in describing events, and i only noticed a few spelling errors, that, considering what they were, are not even worth mentioning. Lol! I noticed, in your authors note, that you said that it would not take you long to up-date, at least not as long as it took to up-date that single chapter. I want to point out, it has indead taken longer, and i am getting impatient. I really like this story, and would like ti to continue, and if it doesnt, i may be inclind to ignore any more of your stories that you start, well, not necessarily ignore, but not review, and possibly give this story a bad rating, for saying one thing, and doing the opposite the next moment. I hope you decide on what you are doing, and give us readers an explanation as to what you are thinking you are doing. I sure hope you follow what you said and up-date your story soon, and if not, i will not be a happy woman. This might be my homons talking, or not, but i do know that iam getting Very impatient.
Hope you had a wonder Christmas and New Years, and that you have a wonderful Valentines Day.
TTFN;
joanne

Hey this is an awesome story!
even though i hate this couple but it has a lot of detail and i can picture everything in my head!! please continue to write more i want to know wat happens!! ILY!

U NEED TO PUT MORE SPACES BTW THE LINES TO MAKE IT EASIER TO READ... SO KAGOME LOOK HUMAN EVEN THOUGH SHE'S A DEMON???

Update!!! I love this story.!!! Please don't make me wait.

Good Story/ Chapter Cant Wait To See What Happens Next ... Update Soon!

ok i fainted, when he kissed her hand :):P

ok i fainted, when he kissed her hand :):P

hey you have 2 of the same chappies up and its a great plot but there are a lot of mistakes in how you present your story like the layout of your text would you like help on that i can help you i love beta-ing you have my email so either email me with next chappie or update up to you.

aw! how sweet! i wish my shoes cost that much...or not...yeah, i dont want 300$ worth of one pair of shoes...but i wouldn't mind it if the were REALLY cool, and sexy, and like, outing at dancing nights...
I hope you up-date soon!
TTFN!
joanne

Love the story and can't wait for more chapters. I love the twist, drama, and the boots LOL. Hope to see more chapters soon. And I guess Kagome could think of it as her date already got her a present lol. Well hope to see more chapters soon love the story and how you describe the places they go.

I love this story so I was really so I was really happy to see a new chapter up. Can't wait to see more chapters soon I love your work and hope you keep it up.

I love this story so I was really so I was really happy to see a new chapter up. Can't wait to see more chapters soon I love your work and hope you keep it up.

I love this story so I was really so I was really happy to see a new chapter up. Can't wait to see more chapters soon I love your work and hope you keep it up.

This is a really good and creative story! I like it alot! Update soon!!!!

p.s- did you know you updated chapter 2 twice?

Hey I still think the story ROCKS! I aso love how you leave it cliffy. It makes readers come back to see what happened

This story has promise but I feel that you could take it to a whole other level. Now I belive that you have the plot under control you know where you want the story to go and you know how to get it there. However you are kinda lacking when it comes to your charater devlopement and your description of feelings, places, and things of that nature. You give only brief desciption of the way that the charaters feel and react and you although I belive you have greatly improved since the last chapter on discribing places and such. I think at if you put in a little more I belive that it would greatly inhance the quality of your story

I think you should develope Kagome more as a character. If she's so set on getting scholarships to college, I don't think she should be falling asleep in class. Also, you might make her seem arrogant about the fact that no-way-in-hell-is-Inuyasha-going-to find-her-a-man and give her a likewise attitude. One last thing (I'm sorry if this all is more than you wanted, but I'm an English major and some of my classes, esp. my Creative Writing class, gives great ideas for improving stories) anyways, it seems like you're telling most of the story, nd not allowing the story to tell itself. What I mean is, allow the story to progress and the audience to figure things out as they read instead of just flat out telling what's happening through like an omnesient background. Hope this helps...I really like this tory and it has a lot of potential! Keep up the good work!

This fic has promise in it...just make sure to explain the sceans...like describe her room, discribe the social system in her school...describe what she looks lie, what everone esle looks like...
and from your summery i got the feeling that she was the bad ass 'bitch' of the school, all guys want her, none have her,, to wild to tame, but still virgin..., sesshy is hot, all girls want him, but he only wants her...i got that from your summery...so...
and could you make it more...'flowing'? im sorry if that isn't very...eplaining, but i can't think of another word for it...
Godd luck with your story! and up-date soon!

very nice entrance to the story, i'm already hooked, e-mail me when you update and hurry up with the update

that is awesome can' wait for the next chapter