| if you haven't allready write a squeal.
Inkasha Tashio- Wed 01 Aug 2007
| Awesome. Your fic was great!! You could have made it a little longer and a little more detailed, but it was great none the less!! Keep up the good work!!
Inulover2005- Wed 11 Apr 2007
| I love the story! A little advice, though. Try giving the chapters a little more detail. It will make the chapters a little longer, but they will keep your fans attracted to the story. Please don't take this the wrong way. Anyway, other than that, I love the story! Keep writing!
Addah- Tue 20 Mar 2007
| don't stop! please keep going!
DarkAngel495- Sat 03 Mar 2007
i like your story but its somehow short so please make it longer but bye the way i still enjoy it so continue doing this story good job!
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DarkAngel495- Sat 03 Mar 2007
i like your story but its somehow short so please make it longer but bye the way i still enjoy it so continue doing this story good job!
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MidnightTimberWolf- Sat 03 Mar 2007
| I like the story line yet the chapters are to short and you seem to be moving to fast on the relationship.... You should add a bit more to the previous chapters I couldn't figure out how Kagome was abducted and assulted while kissing Sesshomaru a bit more info wouldn't hurt otherwise I love the story.... Keep up the good work....
Eva- Sat 03 Mar 2007
| LOL...aww i wanna read it..soundz interestin..
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