wonderful update real soon plz

MORE plz........................

Good job! This is a very interesting beginning!
Although there are some spelling errors and minor grammatical mistakes (don't worry, everyone makes those), the beginning is awesome! Keep going!

Yo! I like the way you've set this up. I'm interested in how she gets stronger!

Oh, and if you need a beta or anything, I'd be glad to do it. I've got more free time than I know what to do with! The only reason I ask is because you have a good amount of common spelling errors, that's all.

Best of luck to you!