*drools* That was awesome.
Short, sweet, hot, to the point, amazingness. You did a very, very, good job. You should most deffinitly give yourself a pat on the back and a cookie!
Good luck
Tanii

chapter three review:
*panting* Good Goddess! That was.... there are no words.
Incredible, fantastic, amazing, they just don't see to cover it.
Great job! Looking forward to the next chapter ^.^
Good luck
Tanii

Chapter two review:
Wow, again. Awww very cute. I love the relationship between Sango and Kagome.
And you're right I did expect Kikyo, great twist. ^.^
Good luck
tanii

Wow. That... was... incredible!
Seriously, is it gettin hot in here, or what? :-p Really though, fantastic.
And I've only read the first chapter!
Anywhoo keep up the awesomeness! I'm going back to reading ^.^
Good luck
Tanii

you could always go into the Sota-Rin-Shippo triangle thing. that would be interesting.

That was so fuckign hot! great job!

I enjoyed reading this fanfic a lot. I must say that had to be one of the best lemons I've ever read.

I just read your story and I found it entertaining. Like you said it has some errors but I found them not to take away that much from the story. I do think in some ways the story was to goody, goody and probably should have stayed a one-shot because it was a lot better that way. But in saying that I still enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more of your work.

Loved it! Update soon!

im in shock!!!!
my friend is laughing her ass off!
and my bloyfriends saying he is horny. but nice story!!

That was a really sweet story. I would really love to see another chapter where InuYasha finds out(hint, hint).