I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Okay well you better hurry with that editing 'cause I want to know what will happen next in the fiction!

Okay well I'll wait some for it.

-bows-

Ja Ne!

I am finished with chapter 3 but how is Naraku alive? In chapter 1 you said this "She DEFEATED Naraku, single-handedly! One arrow and he was dust, floating on the wind."

nice fic! i loved it an hope for more soon!!

Interesting few chapters. It is nice to see who is training Kagome and what they plan to do about Naraku.

This chapter was well worth the wait and I hope you will update quicker. You have a interesting way of writing and I enjoy reading your work.

you're every repetative. If you feel the need to tell both sides of the story, try writing in third person. This way you can give both points of view.
It's great though, and I enjoy hearing both sides of the "story".

Wow..what a really interesting story. I really liked the idea that Kags had to face her inner turnmoil to find her power and I love your portrayal of Sesshys character. He is strong but caring rather then aloof which I read about in too many fics (its a nice twist). Also, I really enjoyed the fact that you did not completely villifiy Inuyasha in order to make Kags and Sesshys relationship work. I can't wait for your next update.

You do not give yourself that much credit. I am really enjoying reading your story. I am glad that you did make some changes because the different POV did get a little confusing. Your story has a different twist to it and I look forward to reading more. It will be interesting to see why the bird demon showed up as well as how tried to take over Kagome's body. So please don't give up on your story there is still to much to be revealed. Until next chapter.

nice

Intresting story, though a bit too OOC, and massive repetition of words. Example: The word 'God(s)'
Word's appearence in the first chap only : 35 times. Just a friendly tip. Try not to repeat a word so often, it makes the story seem...boring almost. Fill it with rich vocabulary, and it will keep the attention of your readers longer. Reused plot, but arn't all stories? Meh, if this review offends you, sorry. Just trying to give some constructive criticisim. Go back and edit some of it, and Im sure this story will be wonderful.

Thank you for the explanation! It definitely cleared up any confusion. Again, I'm eager for the next chapter 3

First I would like to say that I really love the story so far. Angsty & romantic at the same time? Wonderful.

But I have to admit, I'm a bit confused. Where was the turning point from love to doubt and uncertainty? Why has the trust faltered? I'd really appreciate it if you explained that for me.

Besides that, I'm totally excited to see what happens next. Can't wait for the next chapter! 3

This is a very good start to writing fanfiction....Some advice, however....Drop the different POV and learn to write without it. As a reader, switching between POV the way you have done it breaks the flow of the story....makes it choppy. Like I said, though, very good start!