i like the story concept...but uh...if this is like amazon and troy and all that good stuff...in europe.....why is there kimonos, sakura blossoms, and uh...japanese dialect?

Great story! I hope you update soon.

I kinda like your idea, but your plot goes a bit too fast. It would be better if you would slow down a bit, maybe showing us what your maincharas feel, what they think. This could be easily achieved by writing in the first persons view. It can ofcourse be done by writing from "outside the charas head" too.. but that is so much more difficult. I also would love to read more descriptions. It would be wonderful to understand more about the decoriating, clothing.. make up.. small things like that. Well, until the next update.

I like the your story, it's different and I want to see what happens, please update! :D

I like it, it's interesting and new but that last chapter was weird.