Baby doll a beta would do you a world of good; so far it's 'and she did this then she did this and then she decided to do that!' It has great potential you just need some help polishing it.

i didn't see how you had a new version of Kagome's Destiny, but now this story is written much better.

hey ill help if you ned it

i love this story, i cant wait for you to updated.

I LOVE IT KEEP GOING!!!!!!

hey sorry if i neglected to update ive neglected my stories for long enough..heh ...heh..well i lobved it update soon

i love this story i have gotten on kagsess every day just to see if you have updated so happy you did
if you want i'll review you every new chapter

Please update icare about this story i think it cool