katie- Sat 02 Sep 2006
wow i like it please keep going

angie- Mon 05 Jun 2006
i think you should continue this story cause it sounds really good

shelby- Mon 05 Jun 2006
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Samantha Sargent- Mon 05 Jun 2006
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I Beg of you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks if you write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

djl- Mon 05 Jun 2006
please continue your story... good first chapter... I would definitely like to see more... until then

Stephanie- Mon 05 Jun 2006
Oh i love it, i mean its alot better than anything i could ever come up with.

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