I really like this story so far. Jaken is funny. Sesshomaru is still Sesshomaru and I like that you kave kept him so in touch with his normal personality. But it still changed over time. No one can be completely emotionless when it comes to the modern world...hee
thoughtfulillusion- Mon 27 Nov 2006
I'll admit it, I'm curious. It seems good so far and I look forward to future chapters. One thing bothered me though...I'm not positive but I'm pretty sure that no 'witches' were burned in the New England witch hunts. If I remember correctly, it was something like 19 hanged and one pressed to death...but then again that was just in Salem...being from MA, would probably be a travesty if I didn't know that much. I can't say I'm sure about other places, but I just thought I'd let you know.
Keep up the good work! ^.^
lol nice chapter! u no when u act like an idiot like u did in the chapter i had to walk away so i wouldn't spit my drink on the pc monitor. lol but that was an awesome chapter and hurry and speak more about kago-- er Annie lol > lmao
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LuaHaunted- Mon 27 Nov 2006
Wow......................
This sounds................... promising.........
In a way................ it´s veeeeeery different from other stories that happen in America (I usually HATE them ^^)
But this one, I really loved!
Yes!
So......
Keep the good work! I´m cuirous about Annie/Kagome, and Sesshoumaru must look adorable in those clothes! ^^
(Jakken is really funny too!!!)
So.......
I hope you update soon! Will you???
Please????
Thanks!
Bye!
Is ok,I was hoping more.Good intro bty.
It sucks! Lol, only kidding, IT REALLY SUCKS! What do you plan on doing huh? The story is set now come up with a stong chapter 2, what will Kagome do? Where is Kagome, and who the hell is annie, on top of that, couldn't you come up with more original English names? I hate you ! YOU STILL OWE ME MONEY!!!! CRY PIG-LOT! I'll see you at home...honey...
**Toxic**- Sun 03 Sep 2006
UPDATE SOON, thanks!
-Amanda-
**Toxic**- Thu 31 Aug 2006
Heya!
Woah...I must say I am loving your story so far! Its absolutely wonderful! You should definatly continue! I love your writing style, you seem to be very talented. I hope you will update soon, I defiantly want to read more and hopefully soon.
-Amanda-
wow that was amazing do write more soon!!
Hao- Wed 30 Aug 2006
is Anne supposed to be an amnesic Kagome with strange flashkbacks and groundless knowledge of another self with no background?
I dont know, but when I read the summary thats what came to mind. And if you say -heavy religious action-, it sounds like there is going to be witch prosecuting...hmm, if that is so, our miko and taiyoukai are done for hehehe, for obvious reasons. in the olden days people liked to meddle with other people's live A LOT
Ari- Wed 30 Aug 2006
I like it
oh yeah
it seems vey interesting and, most important of all, veeeery original
but... what is Jaken doing in amerika?
lol, i could tell it was kim since the moment you said "yellow eyes"
update soon
Ari
mangadreams- Wed 30 Aug 2006
what a cook and original plot line. luvs it!!
Ren Taisho- Wed 30 Aug 2006
this is good!! tell when next chapter is up ok bye
Ren Taisho- Wed 30 Aug 2006
this is good!! tell when next chapter is up ok bye
mortefille- Sat 13 May 2006
sugoi!!!! keep writing I so wanna see how kagome and sesshoumaru stumble into each other and whats up with that annie character. Is that kagomes new name or is that just someone that ties into the story and will help in bringing these two lost souls together. Just wondering. ^.^
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