Title: Attached

Summary: Kagome and Inuyasha are twins, they do everything together and some friends believe them to be attached at the hip. Everything was perfect in their little world until Kagome decides that she's ready for some space and an intimate relationship. How is she going to tell Inuyasha about Sesshoumaru without hurting him?

Your story has a good start. You should just call it kagome. It does read like a VC Andrews novel though so it makes me wonder if she was your inspiration.

Brother Problem is a fine name for this one.

I think you should name it Brotherly Love or something that kindof hinds at what the story might be about, its very good!

Here's a thought, how about if you call it "Brother Dear"? After reading it in the end. It would sound like that she needs to find a way to tell him that he needs to quit doting on her. Anyways good storie. I'm putting this to my fav. So I'll be checking up on you!