I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Hey there, Just want to say that i absolutly love this story. I find it so refreshing, the plot anyways, to have Kagome and Sesshomaru not love each other at first site, like so many other fics that i have read. Cant wait for the next update.

Cya ^_~

wow... finally... kag and sessh..... phew... that took forever.... what a complicated relationship they have... but all in all... you have great way and sometimes fustrating, in keeping it going.... great job... update soon... thanks...

ill kill for youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!! lol
im insane....
ahhhhhhhhh i cant believe its almost over...makes mika berry sad...*sniff* sequal? pwease? *puppy eyes* mika wuvy you

I wonder what caught his interest? I don't think it is another woman since he thought of Kagome before anything else. He knows that what he has with Kagome would end if he ever did something with another woman. And since he thought of her all morning and only wants her, I can't seem to think of what else could be there. Till next chapter.

ohhh man the shit is about to hit the fan... Sess is evil having the dress altered. However, I have the distinct feeling that his plan might just backfire on him.

nooo Kags lost the Kaede Catering Corporation...

And Sess... he needs to get the stick out of his ass.

I hope those two can bond over Stephen King.

oh crap... the wedding!!

10million points to you for such a wonderful story!!

so they are going to court-- I'd say that's one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind

ohhh so heart-wrenching. that is terrible what kagome is having to put up with!! Beautifully written, you captured her emotion with a skillful flare!

ohhh man... Sess needs a serious attitude adjustment...

oh man... that would indeed be a really prickish thing for Sess to do to try and buy back his daughter... but I think Kags will prove to be more of a challenge than he thinks

wow beautiful idea for a fic. I really like how you have characterized Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I am interested in seeing how this plays out.

WOW!!! They are going through a lot...lol! I can't wait to read more of this story. They belong together and that is just all there is to it! ;)

wow, this chapter is awesome! Rin's soo cute too, and the way they made peace is extremely romantic! please upload a new chapter soon!

I am sorry to as tis but shouldnt kagome be run away from naraku instead of joining him? maybe it will get better next chapter?

I love you fic....I m always anxiously looking for updates...*S*..You keep up the great work, and tell Red that if anyone snitches over your upcoming lemon, I will be more than happy to help her exact revenge....*S*...Good luck!

I loved this story! It was excellent please keep up the good work n could u please continue it n finish the story. Thanx

awwwwwwwww, why tha arm? it's not fair

46
Wow! I feel so bad for them! They were so close.
I can't believe it, but I do understand why he's pushing her away.
I gotta say, I like the fact he lost his arm. It works well within the storyline. I think he really needed to know that he is not an invincible demon.
Well done!

stupid seshh.. are u going to make kasgs leave????? start a new life? kill her self? start studyng? working???

Awww, this story is got to be the best I have ever read... Sesshomaru was a ass in the story but I'm glad he realizes now how much Kagome means to him and he has grown to love her... Thank goodness for that... I can't wait to read chapter 46. I hope its not Sesshomaru's blood on Kagome. I wouldn't want him to die while he was proving to her how much he loves her. An as far as Mei Lin that bitch should be delth with like the bitch that she is..... If I were Sesshomaru I would tell Kagome the truth because she is bound to find out anyway. And this happened when they were free to date other people. So Kagome shouldn't get mad at him. She shoud for the fact that he brought the BITCH into the house for the children to see and that wrong. But after the shit that they both put each through don't you think they deserve a second chance to be husband and wife and have a wonderful and romantic honeymoon that they both dream of having. You are a very wonderful and talented writer and I would advise anyone who love Inuyasha fanfiction to read your story I have been reading this story for a long time . I printed all 45 chapters and read them on the weekend or before I go to bed and I really love this story. Please keep up the splendid work on this story...can't wait for the next chapter. ^________^
Thanks for a really good story you should try to become a real writer someday because the story is so real like everyday stuff.

omg you have to update

i stayed up all night just to finish reading it and to stop here?
no ma'am =]

i hope that you update soo nplease and thank you!

your evil!!! T.T

good chapters, though I have the feeling that things just started happening too fast. Still, I like your story, and can't wait til the next chapter. Please update soon. Good luck on your writing!

oh come on!! well anyway just update sooner k? cause i don't like hold ups especially when the story is just starten to get really hot!!

you are such a tease.... well, at least sessh is finally showing that he has feelings for kag... the moment i have been waiting for a very long time... update soon alright... thanks

I WANT MORE PLEASE WRITE MORE CHPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Review of chapter 45
Mei Lin MUST suffer and live well deserve hellish life, since she doesn't fear death. I was secretly thrilled from the ass kicking she received.
Nice cliffy and thanks for the long chapter. I loved it!

ohh is sess gonna die

This was a very good chapter. I didn't expect what happened in this chapter to take place. Very entertaining. I think you have a good since of humor. I think I will call you th cliff hanger Master because you know we are going to come back for more! "P

I really REALLY love reading this fanfic. Man, I always look for your updates as well. I had originally started reading it on Fanfiction.net and I still do, but I find this better so I can leave a review. ^_^

-River

love it. Love it LOVE IT!

Please update soon.

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love it. Love it LOVE IT!

Please update soon.

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Whose blood is it??????

Tell me!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well it was a good chapter anyway.
can't wait for more.

I've been reading this fic for a while ( almost two years) and I am happy that sparks are igniting between them.
I love that Kagome's backbone has returned.

I LUV THIS FANFIC...THIS IS THE 2 TIME I'M SEND A REVIEW
PLEACE WRIGHT MORE CHAPTER I LUV LUV LUVTHIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG. I have just finished chatching up with reading this fic. I love it. and i love the fact that you take your time with the relationship with Kagome and Sesshomaru. It takes time for love to grow. Can't wait for the next chapter.

besides the fact that this story is dragging on. I really don't like how Kagome would just up and decide to have sesshoumaru's kid just because he asked her two and it would look good for rin. Kagome would probably put up a fight and not have a kid with someone who treats her so wrongly. Having a kid is a big decision no matter how much money you've got.

wow can't wait to read the next chapters. It's really good

okay i like ur FF and i don't beleive in love a first sight so i like the way its going but i think it was a little mean what sesshomaru doing to kagome like hitting her but the car thing was all right becuz he could get her a new one but other then the hitting i like the way it going update soon plz ^-^

I LOVE THIS FIC I HOPE YOU WRITE MORE.................I WAS STARTING TO THING THEY WOULD NOT FALL IN LOVE BUT I GUESS I WAS WRONG.

Do not listen to any of the negative stuff. This could be the next Barbara Taylor Bradford write up. This is super I am looking forward to the next five chapters. (smile)

You go, girl!!! I happen to like how you're writing this fic. It has it's own unique quality to it and I can honestly see Kagome in her role as Rin's mother and Sesshoumaru being full of himself in modern times. Being rich can lead to his behavior as I've seen it happen. Rin turning alittle bratty and spoiled was a nice touch...InuYasha coloring on the wall was a riot. Kagome feeling teary over that car and her memories also made sense and it was a nice touch that Sesshoumaru conceded to listen to her talk. I'm so glad he apologized for hitting her, though it too happens to even the most controlled and patient of people. His thoughts of InuYasha dating her and keeping her "out of trouble" is a disaster waiting to happen because Kagome now knows InuYasha and she's not the type to purposely allow him to hurt her. I think InuYasha is just playing Sesshoumaru to get his money he deserves. He saw how Sesshoumaru reacted to Naraku and to the kiss he gave her in the kitchen. You're weaving a nice storyline here and in doing so you're learning and experimenting with your talent. Don't give up, little one, just like you, I like this fic too. I'll be watching for updates...no matter how long it takes. But should you need to discontinue the story, could you please email me and let me know? My daughter knows how you feel about not having a computer that takes floppies. She's got close to a hundred of them stuffed with her favorite anime stuff and my computer doesn't use floppies and hers is going through a very slow and irritating death. Keep an eye at remanufacturing stores where people trade their computers. We bought my husband an old Gateway Win 98 laptop that had every port that a desktop comp has, including a floppy drive and dvd/cd player. We paid $80 for it. It's not very fancy or has alot of hard drive, but it suits his purposes. Just be sure if it doesn't come with a recovery/wipe disk that you can buy one for it. I go to getpartsonline.com, thy're pretty reasonable. Anyway, sorry for chatting so long, I sometimes get a tendency to blabber on when I'm lonely. It's cold and wet here in Misssouri and we still have trees on our mobile home from the ice storm last month. Our land looks like a cyclone hit it...life really bites sometimes. Take care my friend. Hope school and life are fairing well for you. Jen

HA HA HA HA HA!!!! Inu sure knows how 2 spend money! This is good... UPDATE SOON!!!!

I am rather enjoying your story. I find it different and entertaining. Sorry to hear you are getting a lot of complaints about it being drawn out. A lot of people aren't into the romance any more they just want to go straight for the lemons. You are right one event does not make someone just fall for one another. Feelings and emotions develope with time and I like the conflict that I am reading has the story continues. I can't wait to read your next chapter.

You know, you're right about how most Sessh/Kag stories go to quick, so the way this story is being written seems more...real. I like it a lot, and I cannot wait to read more!!

I remember reading that Sesshomaru's ready for another kid. What's up with that? When will that come into the plot? I think its pretty obvious that they like each other. Like Sesshomarus' stomach problems or even when Kagome said Sesshomaru's working to hard. Its obvious theres some concern there. Anyway I hope you update soon. Try not to keep us in suspense to long.

goshinuyasha is a punk lol! but ya gotta love him... ^^; lol i really liekd this chapter, iit put some 'fluff' of sessh and kagz in it and got some info on inu and kagz relationship. awesome chapter keep upt he great work and hope ya update again soon!

HEY THERE!
This is a wonderful fic and I like the way you have characterized everyone! And you are right, I don't believe in this love at first site either! I really look forward to your updates and I am really looking forward to when Kagome finds out about Sesshoumaru's paid mistress! I really wanted to call her something else but I won't! But anyhow, I think Kagome is gonna be hurt to no end after she finds out the truth about Inuyasha and the mistress, but im sure that will be dealt with in a K agome way, maybe you can let Kagome slap the crap out of him for hitting her. Ok, you just carry on and I like long stories and long chapters. It gives the readers a chance to look into the private lives instead of a few chapters and they are now in love stuff! So thanks for updating and i'll be waiting for the next update.

I can agree the relationship is building slowly but the way you are writing everything is coming together slowly but surely. Its not like they are together for long periods of time or spend time together. For something to develop its gonna be slow. Sesshomaru is thinking more about her. Throwing Kouga into the mix and he's staying there oh boy its gonna be interesting to say the least. Add in everything else thats going on, I wonder when its gonna blow up in their faces. Whether something might slip in a heated moment ( I personally was thinking argument, but others work well too), or spoken aloud in innocent naivety, or something else .Its sure going to be very interesting once all the players are in position. Great Job. Till next time.

lol i loved the last an. straight to the point, yet still hiding secrets.. can't wait 'till u update!!

man i love this story! it's really unique and I just hope Naraku has a bigger part! if not, oh well becuase the plot and everything is awesome! man is Sessh a horndog! but he's still a demon right? I;m not sure... he kept his pricky attitude alright, kagome is one brave soul.... lol

wow, the plot thickens... you write really fast, and that's good. Hope you update soon too. I couldn't wait to find out what happens between Inuyasha and Kagome, and when Sesshomaru's gonna step into the romantic scenes. Well, whatever you write, whether you let Inuyasha or Sesshomaru be her first, it's alright. Though I'd really exited on finding out how you'd write it. I'm with you all the way! :D Good luck to you!

another focus... now tha kag is out of a job... why not have her help kaeda.. doesn't she own a catering business or something... have kag dated kouga yet, if not, that's another male in the pics.... kag needs to do something that makes her look that she doesn't need sessh... she needs to go independent.... i mean in reality, at this point, when rin is old enough, and kag and sessh relationship doesn't pan out... a divorce can be kags future... so she needs to plan... we all know how stubborn sessh can be..... it looks like it will take him a long while to have feelings for kag... and i think by that time, rin will be old enough to understand the situation and kag might need to stay marry to sessh... well, anyway.... i just need to vent some fustration about the fic...not that i don't like it... it's great but, this is really taken a long time.... and kag seem so pathetic when it comes to sessh.... she need to grow a back bone or something... she needs more activity and not just involve herself only just rin.... now she have someone to share the burden of raising a child... shouldn't she have some fun...... ok i'm done... sorry, heheheheheee ;)

I really enjoy reading this story and when I saw that it was updated with 6 more chapters...I guess you could say I was really happy,lol. I have to say that it would be great to see that Kagome's first time with Sesshoumaru after some sort of bizarre event, but you do what you got to do in order for it to tie in with the story. Can't wait for the upcoming chapters!

love it. keep updating

I gotta say, this story is good and entertaining. I look forward to the next update. Good Luck on your exams!

wow.. another baby!! with kagome? i love your story so much.. i cant wait till u update.

I find you to be a great storyteller. I have enjoyed reading this story. Even though where you have left off, is keeping us wanting more, I can't wait to find out what happens next. I like the direction the story is going inspite of what others may think. Until next chapter.

I love the story! I really want there to be more kag/sess stuff tho. Good luck with Semester Exams! n update soon!
~Kat

I missed like 6 chapters, how did that happen? But anyway, I like th storyline alot. When i read about Naraku being a good guy I totally just screamed out "what the fuck?" I knew something was gonna prove me right. I aboslutely love the story, although . . . I have to say I seriously want to see Sessho just get impulsive and kiss her once then decided when he hears Inu talking about her that he wants her. But that's just my imagination and what i hope will happen. *dreamy sigh* Sessho . . . . . . *shakes head* What was I talking about? Oh yeah, good chapters, awesome storyline and don't forget to like totally ignore any comments that i make that are pushy or just plain weird. I like the story alot, can't wait for the next update. WTG!!!

I love your story. Keep up the great work and I hope to see the next chapter as soon as you can.

Wonder what happens if someone finds out that Sesshomaru's being unfaithful to Kagome?

Maybe someone like Naraku, but would he really hurt Kagome like that. Although maybe he could somehow let Rin know and she could either mention it to Kagome or even her father?

Anyway, great chapter please update real soon.

please update soon i want to know what happpen next...and will shesshouamru return to china again?

I really like this plot. I stayed on line for a whole day and read it. I can't wait to see Seesh and Kagome together. I hope Kagome beats Mei Lin's ass.

I wondered what that bitch's name was. i wasn't sure but I knew that it definitely was not kagura, she's just too her. Anyways nice going, But I have a suggestion for Mei Lin, Let me into the story to kill her and to get Sesshy and Kags together before I actually do jump in and kill tyhe bitch with my bare hands.
Whew . . . sorry don't know what came over me. What happened?Ohh yeah the bitches of the world unite. Well back on topic nice chapter, maybe a chapter 25 sonn? *cute, innocent, wide blue eyes look up at Tamasha* please ?

I agree with you about Kikyo, and she's always helping them in the end. I like that you made Kikyo and Kagome friends. Even though the Kikyo bashing is okay I just don't like how she's always a slut. I like when she's cruel and mean not just sleeping with everyone. I like Kikyo in your story. Do you have a thing against Shippou he's cute and funny and a know it all. If not for him I don't think Inuyasha would even realize he has to chose. Or think about it as much. Shippou makes him realize that he can't have both. I can't wait until you up date. I enjoy your story can't wait for more to come.

so when does kag break free from sessh... at this point with all the whores he sleeps with, she shouldn't touch him, not even with a ten foot pole.... kag needs a boyfriend....

Hmmm...The plot is starting to thicken. I wonder what Naraka has in mind? Hee...hee...hee :)
I'm still reading and waiting for more updates. ;)

PLEASE UPDATE!!! I SWEAR I WOULD DIE IF YOU DON'T SOON!!!! **begs on knees** PLEASE!!!!!!

WHAT HAPPENS WITH KAGUYA??? DOES SHE WANTS RIN BACK? WHAT WOULD SESSHOMARU DO?? HE CAN'T GO BACK TO THAT SLUT, CAN HE?!!! WHEN WILL HE STARTS FALLING FOR KAGOME????

UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!!

Gah!!!
I loooove your story!
You must write more! More More More!!! Buwhahahaha!!
*cough..* er... yea please write more I look forward to it
Good luck and keep up the good work
~Tanii

omg.. i cant belive that women is going to come back.. please update soon

wow i like it please keep going

How long does Sesshomaru think he could hide this from everyone?

If Kagome tells Naraku or if he finds out that Sesshomaru is making alot of trips out of the country, wonder if he will suspect something.

Wonder if Naraku is trying to find any dirt on Sesshomaru, maybe having him secretly followed or something that he could use to come between Kagome and him?

If he does find something on Sesshomaru, how will he let Kagome find out?

He could use the media to his own advantage. Maybe some pictures of him and Melin an intimate way, making him look bad or something.

Will he try to find Kaguya, hoping that she would cause some troubles for Kagome and Sesshomaru? Or is Kaguya somehow dead?

How will Kgome and her friends react, if what Sesshomaru is doing ever comes out?

One thing for sure, if Rin ever finds out that his father somehow hurts the only mother she ever knew, this could ruin the bound they started.

Please update ASAP

i'm sorry... by the time sessh falls in love with kag... if he ever does, which it doesn't looks like it... he'll be diseased... good grief... when will kag date someone... sessh is becoming a bigger jerk everytime a chap comes out.... rin doesn't need a father like that... rin should grow up like her real mother... it seems sessh like that kind of women.... and if sessh does falls in love with kag... he does fit the bill of a faithful husband....since he sleeps around so much..... kag needs a boyfriend... and just drop sessh....

this fic is so far good...although i do NOT like how sesshoumaru treats kagome..but that's just me. i do hope you update soon and i hope sesshoumaru starts to act better towards kagome soon. he's such a meanie! update soon please and thank you!

that was a short chapter, but it's ok! Added Tama-san's MoC to Lacus-chan's favorites. ^_^

hey Tamasha. Great chapter and I must agree with you, the Chinese gal needed to re appear to add some heat to the fire. You sure know how to make a girl hated in a story. I can just see Sesshoumaru getting angry if Kagome were to "get a life" making her an unfit mother in his eyes. But that's the way the gate swings with most men, ne? How's school comin' along? And the goodlooking teacher? I had one of those in Science class many moons ago. Got straight A's just because I couldn't stop watching him move. Yeah, he knew me all too well. But whatever it takes to get the grade without crossing any lines...loads of girls loved him and didn't care he was married either. Anyway, you'll be hearing from me often, I am loyal and honest too. Jen

I would never delete this story...like I said before, I'm hooked. Just an idea: have Kagome go to college & finish up with top honors (help her boost her self-esteem) then take special interest in Sess's business dealings...maybe give her the upper hand for a change. Then at one point bring back Kaguya & her father to stir up some trouble...of course Kags will never loose Rin. Also, maybe if Sess brings in Mei Lin into their home as his mistress...don't let Kags role over & just take it (let her kick some butt). Ohhh...so many posiblities for this story. Keep it going because you are on my favourite author's list :)
Great job...you are rocking.

Love the story but Sesshoumaru is a real ass but anyway it would be interesting if there was a guy who was a vampire (who Kagome knows for a very long time) who has feeling for Kagome but that just an idea but hope later on that Sesshoumaru changes later on in the story. Hope that you're update soon.

thank you thank you thank you for starting to write again

You are gonna be getting a review from me everytime I realize that you have updated so don;t worry much you'll always have lil ol' me. lol. Anyways great chapter, I can't wait to find out what happens to Mei Lin, right now I'm praying that she dies and never walks tha face of the earth ever again, but that is because I hate her guts and want her to die along with all trace and mention of the EVIL ONE!!!!! ( don't ask you'll just get even more confused anyways awesome again and I'm waiting for any and all updates.

i am a big fan of this story; however, i must ask that you not allow that slut to live with kagome and rin. while it might be interesting to see how it would evolve, i highly doubt that kagome and sess will ever get together after that. it just seems unrealistic and an insult to kagome. however, i think that kagome needs a love interest. it seems unfair for sess to have all the fun.

anyway goodluck with wrting and i look forward to read the next chappie...

yeah, I know how it feels to get cut off of awesome reviews (but of course, my stories suck to me and I never finish them!) BUT, I really enjoy this fic, so keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next chapter!!!

I do love your work. And believe me if I ever get alerted to a new chapter, I will read it right away and review. I love this story. Please continue to update and hopefully it will be soon.

ugh! as much as i love this story and sesshoumaru/kagome, his freaking manwhore-ness is getting on my nerves! D= is there any sight of a change in the next few chapters?

OMGosh...please don't let Sesshoumaru bring that piece of trash home around Kagome and Rin! Please! I think Sess is disgusting enough already and doesn't deserve Kagome. Shit, (shaking my fist here at Sess) you must be a good upcoming author to make me upset like this! I know it's a common practice in other countries for men to do this but I just feel bad for Kagome. It makes her look ugly and like she can't get a man. Please, send Kagome a man and make Sesshoumaru jealous! This is exactly what the creep needs! Kagome needs to be seeing someone else and making Sess jealous enough to have her followed. I think that's fair! Ok, I know it's your story, just wanted to make a suggestion, please don't get mad because I am a very loyal reader, but I am not on your list, and I would be very happy (on my knees with clasp hands here) if you would add me!! Fantastic fic!

please keep it flowing

that was a great chapter! Sesshoumaru is starting to piss me off with his chinese whore tho...meh....makes the story more interesting ne?
good chapter...i really like the story...especially how u r making thier (sess/kag) relationship move slowly...great job!

i can sympathize with you...doesn't it suck when you don't get many reviews for a story? it's irritating ne? or when ur ratings are low and people don't like to tell you what you are doing wrong? that really sucks!

Try not to let it dicourage you tho...sometimes i just ignore the ratings cus

1) it irritates me to no end

and

2) i write to relieve stress...

anywho...please update when ever u can and i'm gonna check out that new school fic u mention....Ja!

///From The Desk Of Sesshoumaru's Fiend and Demonic Nightmare///

-[Ashley]

Great Story!!! I have been reading it since the beginning, and awaited patiently for you to continue. I cannot believe that he is even considering bringing a whore in to his home, when he was the one that thought Kagome an unfit mother because of her financial status, does he not care what she is going to say or his daughter at that or is he going to lie to the poor child. If he does move her in I have a request please move Kagome out. I am tired of reading stories where not only does she have to put up with his infedelity but right in her face none the less. Just a request it is your story after all.

wweeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!! itS SO COOL!!!! I wonder what kagome will do when that bitch shows up at HER house. hehehehe!!! hope you update soon.

I love the story. Please update soon.

Okay that took me a full day to read this entire story. I have one thing to say about it. It is for lack of a better word . . . AWESOME!!!! I can totally picture thi sin my head as I read it. I still think that Sesshomaru is a jerk but I always have thought that. It just doesn't matter. LOL. ( warning I have a really weird sense of humour so good luck understanding what i am talking about half the time.) Anyways it was like totally completely awesome. Honestly I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter because this is now one of my fave fics. And as to the parakeet comment, I have to ask, what colour, how old and do you think he/she would be able to beat mine? She's a beaut, bluish-grayish and sings to almost anything, she's almost 4 years old. Her name's Belle. Now, i'm rambling and getting totaly off topic, I'm just gonna say AWESOME again and wait for the next chapter. hehe.

I sent you an email, little one. I kept reading and reading with short breaks so I could do mother/wife type stuff, but you had me glued to this screen until I finished. 1 a.m. in the morning. I happen to live in Missouri so our time is close. Would love updates on your stories, yes, I'm a now loyal fan. I wonder, do they always posts all new updates? Because I know how busy and frustrating life gets so I can just keep looking there if you can't email me. My daugther hated Poetry in Creative Writing class too, so don't feel bad, just try to get a passing grade so you can go on with getting the credits to graduate. I'd love for you to keep up the writing. You have a flare for making the idea?plot? really your own. You're doing great. I know if you had more time you'd catch those little mistakes,but anyone with a brain can figure out the words misspelled or missing. Hope to see an update soon, but I'm a patient person, keep your grades up and keep your parents happy too. I used to take my girl's computer away when she wasn't doing good, so anyway, keep up the good work. TTFN!!! Jen

PLZ PLZ PLZ PLEASE update this fic. My friends and I have been looking in on this site everyday just to see if you have updated!T.T

hello little one. I truly like your story and hope that you don't think all of the fans out here , as well as, writers are under the age of 18. {your an in chapter 5} My 19 yr. old got me hooked when she was 13 on anime and this past January after heart surgery, on fanfics. I'm a proud 46. I like your work and I love watching people grow in their love of writing and you are doing great. Minor typos, grammar and such, but I hold you in high regard for your ability to write, go to school and deal with the hardships of being a child of divorce. Keep up the good work and I hope to continue to see you grow. Do you do any other fics on other sights other then InuYasha? Jen

hello! i liked your fic! though I believe it requires a little editing, typos here and there, blahblah... but please update soon!! I cant't wait to find out what's gonna happen next!! :D

Please, please , please update now. How can you leave us like that for over a year without updating? Please. Contact me with your reply.

will u continue the story?

will u continue the story?

Dude...I freaked when I realized this story had not been updated in a year. Will you ever update or finish this story? I love it and you got me hooked on it. I was devastated to realize that it stoped at the most critical moment. You're mean :( I'm crying my eyes out. Otherwise, with the exception of a few grammar and spelling errors, it's a good story. I really hope you don't wait or forget to update this story or maybe let someone else finish it for you (of course you get the credit...get a ghost writer or something) but you have just got to finsih this one. Please....please...pretty please w/ a cherry on top :)
I usually try not to read incomplete stories but this one drew me in and now I'm panting for more.

This story is hilarious!!! I hope you decide to contin this story.

Bruce n' Charlie

More chapters please:)
DON'T LEAVE AT CLIFFY( I BEG YOU).

I find this fic absolutly funny and i can't wait to see what Kagome does in her dress hope Sesshomarua' splan back fires- please write more soon.

Oh my god you have to up date if you don't i might die...I have to know what happens.It's soo interesting i'm hooked.

Oh my god you have to up date if you don't i might die...I have to know what happens.It's soo interesting i'm hooked.

PLEASE PLEASE update quickly! it's getting sooo good. You are an awesome writer with alot of creativity and style. I've read alot of fanfictions for a while, but I must say your's will definitly be one of the ones i would remember.