it's pretty good. just wondering about some points:

who are the two people at the beginning and what are they for? could you give us some hint on what part they play in the story during the next chapter?

were kikyo and sesshoumaru involved in someway in the past? the la\st chapter gave some idea when the nurse said the kagome closely resembled someone a century ago.

if it wasn't kikyo (i do have my doubts as kikyo was 50 years before kagome not 100 years), was sesshoumaru in love with her, lose her and turned himself into the ice prince he is?

i would be thinking right now that sesshoumaru would be reminded by kagome of that person in his past, spend some time with and fall in love. maybe some fights in the middle. i hope there will be some inu-bashing! it would be fun!! what i expect is a bit cliche but its my view.

good luck!!!

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