Hi. First I want to say thanks for the critique, my first one ever! I am sorry, I thought I put in the writer's notes that this is a dark story and that it has a lot of abuse. I will add more trigger warnings when I edit. I do not want to cause triggers for anyone so, by all means, enjoy the other works of the wonderful authors here on Dokuga! Hopefully, if I decide to write another fic, you may give it a try

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Thank you for your review on "The HIme Tradition". I totally understand your frustrations with Kagome right now. It was really hard to write that chapter too. But...I didn't want to make our precious heroine too perfect. She had her flaws..and in this chapter...it's stubbornness. Hopefully someone will lead her to the right direction.
And thank you once again for reading this chapter!

AHH! Too many things in your review on "The Hime Tradition" that TOTALLY melted my heart into a puddle of goo.
First, thank you for pointing out that Kagome's reason to NOT break off her promise with INuyasha was logical. I mean...I didn't want everything to be based off of emotions....too much. And Kagome's a smart girl, so it would be ridiculous for her to just break off her ties with him.
Second, I'm glad that this chapter was able to pull so many emotions from you. Don't worry.... I totally understand your frustration over Kagome's decision and actions.
Thank you for your thoughts! I shall keep them safe within my heart!

*chuckles*
Yes...errr I DID leave the last chapter to "The HIme Tradition" as a cliff hanger... oooooppppssss. But, I haddd toooo~ Such an important moment...had...to be paused and digested by the readers! I'm glad you love the story though *phew*
Thank you again for the review! Feeling recharged to continue writing up the next chapter!

Thank you! That was the nicest thing that's been said to me all day, lol. I've kind of missed me, too... besides all that darn moving, I have had a horrid case of writer's blockade for months now. I'm cautiously optimistic, however - I've been working on several things that have been unfinished, and making some good progress. So I'm keeping my fingers crossed!

Amber

Wow, your last review for "The Hime Tradition" was beautiful! Warmed my heart immediately! I am glad that as the chapters go by, I am able to portray each of Kagome's beautiful character. I hope that you fall in love with both the characters as I create their own world within this story!
Thanks for leaving another review! You are awesome!

Yay! I love when readers review on Kagome's character and how they portray it through the story. I am so glad to read that Kagome has a balance of both maturity and compassion, grace and dignity. "The Hime Tradition" takes place when Kagome is years older, so I imagine she would act like this if she were older! I mean, Kagome just has a lovely character..it's hard NOT to imagine her changing a society! *chuckles*
Anyways, thank you for reading the story and reviewing! Made my day for sure!

Thanks for the review and your help. I must say that you have a wonderful mind that is helping me out of the slump!

Thank you for the review on "The One". It's not a chapter story, each chapter is 250 words long, there is so much I could fit in that limit. Any character I introduced in this story is important, they contribute to the plot, the story is just starting, and will unravel once I'm further down. I'm not going to rush this story. There's always an antagonist or a protagonist. The wait isn't something I can change since I'm going around my college schedule, I usually update one story or all.